Desiring Invitation
Accepted date from a noun22 total reviews
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This poetry is very creative and fun. The flow is
smooth and I like the way that the words are
arranged on the page. I wore a smile from start
start to finish. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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This poetry is very creative and fun. The flow is
smooth and I like the way that the words are
arranged on the page. I wore a smile from start
start to finish. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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You're very welcome, and so happy you enjoyed this, and
especially that it kept you smiling! Appreciate your
most thoughtful and supportive comments. Best always, Ronni
Comment from amada
This is very good, fresh and creative work. It held my attention, and a smile, I could communicate with that playful verb, it held my attention and a smile. Great ending.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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This is very good, fresh and creative work. It held my attention, and a smile, I could communicate with that playful verb, it held my attention and a smile. Great ending.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thank you dear amada, so hpppy you enjoyed and smile through
this poem, and shared your kind and gracious comments.
Sincerely appreciate you...best always....Ronni
Comment from fairy77
haha very nice piece. Priceless and imaginative. You did a great job. I like noun and verb. Very amusing and it was pretty lengthy. Good piece!beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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haha very nice piece. Priceless and imaginative. You did a great job. I like noun and verb. Very amusing and it was pretty lengthy. Good piece!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
Thanks for enjoying and appreciating this poem, and found
it amusing too. Appreciate your thoughtful comments too.
Best wishes always...Ronni
Comment from donaldww
This is an excellent, amusing, and clever poem. A great idea having words personify words, an intimate glimpse into an imaginary world that parallels our own.
Cheers,
DW
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This is an excellent, amusing, and clever poem. A great idea having words personify words, an intimate glimpse into an imaginary world that parallels our own.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
thank yuou Donald...for your most appreciative and perceptive
review, and sharing such supportive comments. And likesise...
much gratitude...for the extra star! Best always....Ronni
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Ronni,
This is a delightful play on words as your poem flows in such an interesting and engaging fashion. It is sad when the verb wants the noun but has to settle for a mischievous adjective. You brought me a smile at the end of a long day, and I appreciate it. I like your color scheme, format, and photo.
Curtis
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Ronni,
This is a delightful play on words as your poem flows in such an interesting and engaging fashion. It is sad when the verb wants the noun but has to settle for a mischievous adjective. You brought me a smile at the end of a long day, and I appreciate it. I like your color scheme, format, and photo.
Curtis
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thank you Curtis, so happy this poem brought you a smile
today, and you enjoyed it so appreciably. Love your comments,
and grateful for your kind sharing, and rating.
Best wishes always...Ronni
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This creative, well-written HOOT of a narrative poem must have a 6! I can only imagine the orgy they'll have when the other lusty parts of speech get there!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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This creative, well-written HOOT of a narrative poem must have a 6! I can only imagine the orgy they'll have when the other lusty parts of speech get there!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Oh my...thank you dear Janice...for the big wow on a 6 star...
so happy you enjoyed...actually I have a peom on a 'Grammar
Party" in the works with those other 'lusty' parts of speech...
LOL..so hang on, coming up...thanks again for your enthusiasm
on this...best always...Ronni
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As a retired English teacher, I'm looking forward to that poem! Janice
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Oh my...now I really have to step up to
the plate on it...LO...thanks for letting
me know....I phased out from Business Communications and by luck landed a
position as a lay instructor on The Humanities,at local college, finally
benefitting a long latent Post Grad degree..
and am loving it. Take care...
best always...Ronni
Comment from Enrique28
This is indeed wonderfully funny. Top marks for the idea, and its delivery. I love the clever grammatical terms, not only for your characters, but also for their actions. Superbly closed with your last line. Excellent stuff!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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This is indeed wonderfully funny. Top marks for the idea, and its delivery. I love the clever grammatical terms, not only for your characters, but also for their actions. Superbly closed with your last line. Excellent stuff!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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So happy you enjoyed, and appreciated your kind and
supportive thoughts and comments, and gracious compliment.
Best wishes always....Ronni
Comment from misscookie
I think you did a wonderful job. If the taught us this way about nouns and verb every one would get an a in that English class. i thought this ea different and funny to read.
thank you for sharing and giving me my first chuckle for the dsay.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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I think you did a wonderful job. If the taught us this way about nouns and verb every one would get an a in that English class. i thought this ea different and funny to read.
thank you for sharing and giving me my first chuckle for the dsay.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Anytime I can make you smile or chuckle Sweetie, I am elated.
This was fun to do, and you gotta' have fun with sords...
since we poets and writers 'seduce' them so often. Indeed,
English Class would have been much more interesting with
a little real life put into them...love you always, Ronni
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I know what you me.
Until next time.
Comment from Treischel
Now that wat very cute and exceedingly clever. A date with a verb becomes a hot night with an adjective. Great visuals! Creative! I bet they found a run on sentence, and slipped into something more comfortable, a short story!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Now that wat very cute and exceedingly clever. A date with a verb becomes a hot night with an adjective. Great visuals! Creative! I bet they found a run on sentence, and slipped into something more comfortable, a short story!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thank you for enjoyeing this poem and your supportive
thoughts and comments, most sincerely appreciated.
Best wishes always for a great day...Ronni
Comment from softlyfalling
Whimsy and wordsmithery in cahoots! Words have feelings? I suspect you have a VERY active inner child, m'lady! Only one connected to and entranced by imagination could pull if saying this with a straight face.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Whimsy and wordsmithery in cahoots! Words have feelings? I suspect you have a VERY active inner child, m'lady! Only one connected to and entranced by imagination could pull if saying this with a straight face.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thank you, wow...that is quite a compliment on the 'inner child'
aspect...and I loved your review! Thanks ever so much for
your supportive comments, sincerely appreciate you.
Best always, Ronni
