Challenge Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "What Is It?"I dare you....
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Comment from angel of the quill
like peaches oranges and apples there
such a lovely thing to share
like wrapping up a present with tender care
Oh words can be like treasures shared carefully in play
or gently hidden for an extra special day
My treasure lays before me in what you stop to say
words have a meaning sometimes all their own
when you decide to share them sometimes it is like coming home
into the favored moment the author spins the tale
off into the readers imagination someone is bound to sail
thanks as always for the lovely poems
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2006
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like peaches oranges and apples there
such a lovely thing to share
like wrapping up a present with tender care
Oh words can be like treasures shared carefully in play
or gently hidden for an extra special day
My treasure lays before me in what you stop to say
words have a meaning sometimes all their own
when you decide to share them sometimes it is like coming home
into the favored moment the author spins the tale
off into the readers imagination someone is bound to sail
thanks as always for the lovely poems
Comment Written 08-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2006
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and thank YOU for continuing to read all of them and reviewing with wonderful poetry of your own :-)
Comment from easyeverett
A pimple on your neighbors ass I think. lOL. This was a very creative and funny write Shelley. Kind of like Poetry Jeapordy without Alex Trebeck. Good write. easy
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2006
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A pimple on your neighbors ass I think. lOL. This was a very creative and funny write Shelley. Kind of like Poetry Jeapordy without Alex Trebeck. Good write. easy
Comment Written 08-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2006
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or the teapot theme song LOL!
thanx lots :-)
Comment from mmichelle97219
This could be any peeling citrus fruit. I love it when poetic formats are placed into cleaver riddles. This is quite good. Now let us see if you can create one with a little difficulty to it. :-)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006
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This could be any peeling citrus fruit. I love it when poetic formats are placed into cleaver riddles. This is quite good. Now let us see if you can create one with a little difficulty to it. :-)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006
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LOL!
will think about what i can do hehe ;-)
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Shelley,
I wrote my answer in a poem
Berries are quite juicy, but sections not a one
Apples, peaches, pears and plums,peeled but sections none
Apricots don't measure up, cantaloupe ... Good Grief!
Watermelon, honey dews, way beyond belief
Bananas are appealing, juicy I say not
Pineapples, grapes and kiwis don't quite fit the plot
I think the subjects citrus with grapefruit, tangerines
Lemons, limes and ......."oranges"
The sweetest squirt cuisine.
{ My guess is the orange}
Challenge poems can be a lot of fun and challenging. I think you've done a great job with these.
I'd like to try some more of these myself!
Well done my friend!
Helvi :o)
PS. Was it you who gave me : Mistletoe, computers, Christmas and pink
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Hi Shelley,
I wrote my answer in a poem
Berries are quite juicy, but sections not a one
Apples, peaches, pears and plums,peeled but sections none
Apricots don't measure up, cantaloupe ... Good Grief!
Watermelon, honey dews, way beyond belief
Bananas are appealing, juicy I say not
Pineapples, grapes and kiwis don't quite fit the plot
I think the subjects citrus with grapefruit, tangerines
Lemons, limes and ......."oranges"
The sweetest squirt cuisine.
{ My guess is the orange}
Challenge poems can be a lot of fun and challenging. I think you've done a great job with these.
I'd like to try some more of these myself!
Well done my friend!
Helvi :o)
PS. Was it you who gave me : Mistletoe, computers, Christmas and pink
Comment Written 13-Jul-2006
Comment from Balladeer
Well Shelley I see a new game
is afoot. I think here the answer
may be an orange. I think this
is fun and you gave a great
description. I guess it could also
be agrape but it dosn't feel right.
Skye
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Well Shelley I see a new game
is afoot. I think here the answer
may be an orange. I think this
is fun and you gave a great
description. I guess it could also
be agrape but it dosn't feel right.
Skye
Comment Written 02-May-2005
Comment from JohnSmith
This is really great. Man I can almost taste that sweet, juicy, er....orange? Fabulous work. Particularly liked...well all of it to be honest.
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This is really great. Man I can almost taste that sweet, juicy, er....orange? Fabulous work. Particularly liked...well all of it to be honest.
Comment Written 02-May-2005
Comment from Rx kingpen
Ok now, I'mma gonna be real good in replying to this..lol..i have been know to have a nasty mind..lol..i don't know what it is sweetie. I lost track with my own wandering mind. Bet it tastes great though. Great poem. Hugs, TJ
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Ok now, I'mma gonna be real good in replying to this..lol..i have been know to have a nasty mind..lol..i don't know what it is sweetie. I lost track with my own wandering mind. Bet it tastes great though. Great poem. Hugs, TJ
Comment Written 02-May-2005
Comment from Black Wren
An orange?
Well, whatever it is it sounds tasty.
*drools*
Ah!
This is what happens when you stay in the dorms all year and only have cafeteria food to live off of.
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An orange?
Well, whatever it is it sounds tasty.
*drools*
Ah!
This is what happens when you stay in the dorms all year and only have cafeteria food to live off of.
Comment Written 02-May-2005
Comment from sengwriter
Should I only give the answer, no let me tell you something about it first - then at last you may get my guess.
Your poem is very experimental and given a style of 'who am I' type quizo pattern. Flow is that smooth as the juice of a fruit that is swallowed slowly into the stomach. You peel your feelings words after words to exposed it to the readers , so many nice things done then why didn't you choose a black background with orange as the font color for your words. Everything would have been finalized! Yes it's orange, a sweet juicy orange. Right my friend? Gautam.
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Should I only give the answer, no let me tell you something about it first - then at last you may get my guess.
Your poem is very experimental and given a style of 'who am I' type quizo pattern. Flow is that smooth as the juice of a fruit that is swallowed slowly into the stomach. You peel your feelings words after words to exposed it to the readers , so many nice things done then why didn't you choose a black background with orange as the font color for your words. Everything would have been finalized! Yes it's orange, a sweet juicy orange. Right my friend? Gautam.
Comment Written 02-May-2005
Comment from Pili Pubul
A very yummy delicious orange , good description my friend , and fun.
"you pull
the soft, juicy sections
apart
placing them with grace
into your mouth
as a delicacy
you savor every taste
every morsel "
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A very yummy delicious orange , good description my friend , and fun.
"you pull
the soft, juicy sections
apart
placing them with grace
into your mouth
as a delicacy
you savor every taste
every morsel "
Comment Written 02-May-2005
