Spring
Spring in all its glory24 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
I really enjoyed your free verse about the
awakening of nature in spring.
Lovely imagery throughout to describe the
wonders of this change of season.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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I really enjoyed your free verse about the
awakening of nature in spring.
Lovely imagery throughout to describe the
wonders of this change of season.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Thank you for taking the time to review it is appreciated. Robin
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. The sights, sounds and smells of spring will soon overwhelm our senses.They will wake us up from the hibernation of winter, Color will bloom every where. Smells will travel to tickle our noses. New born life will announce its presence with a variety of noises. Great work.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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I love the picture. The sights, sounds and smells of spring will soon overwhelm our senses.They will wake us up from the hibernation of winter, Color will bloom every where. Smells will travel to tickle our noses. New born life will announce its presence with a variety of noises. Great work.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the great review it is appreciated so much. Robin
Comment from Treischel
A wonderful free verse poem about spring that covers a it very effectively in wonderful poetic detail. Love how you include more than plants and flowers. You have birds, animals, insects, and even fish. Great portrait you've painted here.
My favorite lines:
Dormant arousal stimulates renewal
A time clock begins to tick, tock, tick
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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A wonderful free verse poem about spring that covers a it very effectively in wonderful poetic detail. Love how you include more than plants and flowers. You have birds, animals, insects, and even fish. Great portrait you've painted here.
My favorite lines:
Dormant arousal stimulates renewal
A time clock begins to tick, tock, tick
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for the time to review it is appreciated so much. God Bless Robin
Comment from words
I like your ode to spring.
Packed with action verbs and nature abuzz with activity.
You could feel life's renewed vitality in each and every line.
What a vibrant write.
Well done.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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I like your ode to spring.
Packed with action verbs and nature abuzz with activity.
You could feel life's renewed vitality in each and every line.
What a vibrant write.
Well done.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for the time to review it is appreciated so much. God Bless Robin
Comment from country ranch writer
Everything is awakening with the come of spring and is mating season of a lot of animals and we will be blessed with new life not to far into the future and we will see all the splendor of mother earth at her best, It like everything is stretching its arm out after a long nights sleep.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Everything is awakening with the come of spring and is mating season of a lot of animals and we will be blessed with new life not to far into the future and we will see all the splendor of mother earth at her best, It like everything is stretching its arm out after a long nights sleep.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for the time to review it is appreciated so much. God Bless Robin
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WELCOME
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written really descriptive and full of colorful imagery and feeling it is beautifully presented I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Yes this is well written really descriptive and full of colorful imagery and feeling it is beautifully presented I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for the time to review it is appreciated so much. God Bless Robin
Comment from RYME4U
This free verse is well written. Its imagery is clear and vivid.The list of spring 'happenings' is well thought out and the rhythm of the free verse is smooth. Good job!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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This free verse is well written. Its imagery is clear and vivid.The list of spring 'happenings' is well thought out and the rhythm of the free verse is smooth. Good job!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for the time to review it is appreciated so much. God Bless Robin
Comment from angelface2
This is a very nice oem telling all the things that happen in the spring of they year. I am so ready for them to happen. Nice poem. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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This is a very nice oem telling all the things that happen in the spring of they year. I am so ready for them to happen. Nice poem. Miss Sally
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much your time to review is appreciated.
God Bless Robin
Comment from EMB
As a person who loves this time of year, you had me smiling with this, all the way until you mentioned the insects. That led me to thinking of butterflies at first, but, eventually, the pesky mosquitoes came to mind, and my smile fizzled. LOL
Still, a great poem. :)
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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As a person who loves this time of year, you had me smiling with this, all the way until you mentioned the insects. That led me to thinking of butterflies at first, but, eventually, the pesky mosquitoes came to mind, and my smile fizzled. LOL
Still, a great poem. :)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review is it appreciated so much.
Robin
Comment from visionary1234
love the breathless pace that runs through this free verse piece - things 'bursting' growing etc etc at a frenetic pace - yet it's also just one window in time, so gives us the glimpse of our lives passing, as does time, very very quickly! :)S
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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love the breathless pace that runs through this free verse piece - things 'bursting' growing etc etc at a frenetic pace - yet it's also just one window in time, so gives us the glimpse of our lives passing, as does time, very very quickly! :)S
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Thank you for taking the time to review, it is appreciated so much. God Bless Robin
