Love means...
A poem based on a song by Edith Piaf16 total reviews
Comment from October21
Beautiful- I loved the part where you mention that if one does not fully love then they won't be able to properly cry and if one doesn't shed tears, their love isn't true... So very clever and honest...:-)
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
Beautiful- I loved the part where you mention that if one does not fully love then they won't be able to properly cry and if one doesn't shed tears, their love isn't true... So very clever and honest...:-)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine
Comment from Galactia
Lovely little poem reflecting love i'm asuming the tears are the tearsof joy? like the pic it represents the poem well.
Regards
tia
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
Lovely little poem reflecting love i'm asuming the tears are the tearsof joy? like the pic it represents the poem well.
Regards
tia
Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine
Comment from donaldww
Excellent poem about love! And I like Edith Piaf, too. She had an extremely difficult life, and yet was able to make beautiful music despite her personal problems.
La Vie En Rose - E.P.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
Excellent poem about love! And I like Edith Piaf, too. She had an extremely difficult life, and yet was able to make beautiful music despite her personal problems.
La Vie En Rose - E.P.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine. Yes you are absolutely right. We saw a film or musical about her life. I don't know how to upload video's anymore as they changed the system in you tube
Comment from terry drake
Very nice, it had an element of honesty within your verse. Love has been expressed in many ways and very seldom has been shared in the way that describes the pain it brings.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
Very nice, it had an element of honesty within your verse. Love has been expressed in many ways and very seldom has been shared in the way that describes the pain it brings.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is very well written my friend you have expressed your thoughts and feelings on love very well I enjoyed well done regards Jill
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
Yes this is very well written my friend you have expressed your thoughts and feelings on love very well I enjoyed well done regards Jill
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine
Comment from judiverse
Excellent comments about love in the first stanza. Your thought about love making people cry is so true, and you carry that out in your other stanzas. The tears show the depth of feeling. If the love isn't so strong and the feelings for the loved one aren't really deep, there will be no tears. Tears show the depth of caring. A powerful thought well expressed. judi
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
Excellent comments about love in the first stanza. Your thought about love making people cry is so true, and you carry that out in your other stanzas. The tears show the depth of feeling. If the love isn't so strong and the feelings for the loved one aren't really deep, there will be no tears. Tears show the depth of caring. A powerful thought well expressed. judi
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thanks for your time and kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine
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You're so welcome. judi