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It involves someone talking despicably to another.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Janice Canerdy
Your poem effectively makes a point about the type of person who confuses and beguiles others by being indirect in his/her word choices.
I am so sorry about the 2, but in this type of poem, those numbers refer to the SYLLABLE counts, not word counts.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
Thank you so much for the feedback. This was my first time writing a poem. I will definitely take your point in to consideration when I next write a poem.
Comment from
country ranch writer
The heart is in so much turmoil. It is so undecided that it thinks it might be superstition keeping the heart from deciding. The heart is hesitant to understand what's taken place
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
Thank you so much for rateing it 4 stars. Reading this made me so happy! :)
reply by country ranch writer on 28-Feb-2013
I try my best to understand
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