True love
Every one wants to know true love4 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
True love indeed that's a lovely and heartfelt epxressed 5/7/5/ poem,nice flow, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.lakeport....
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
True love indeed that's a lovely and heartfelt epxressed 5/7/5/ poem,nice flow, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.lakeport....
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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thanks alot for appreciation
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Your welcome,
could you please review my poem "Joyful Varieties"
thank you,Lakeport.
Comment from LadyCasmir
I like the message here, how love plays out in the day-to-day reality of our lives. There are a couple typos if that matters to you:) Thanks for sharing this poem from the heart.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
I like the message here, how love plays out in the day-to-day reality of our lives. There are a couple typos if that matters to you:) Thanks for sharing this poem from the heart.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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thanx
Comment from beccabootie123
great poem of love, need to spell check many errors, it makes the piece stutter alittle but still the point is made, the color palate works well.
"keeps" not "keepss"
"with" true love not "it" true love
and more
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
great poem of love, need to spell check many errors, it makes the piece stutter alittle but still the point is made, the color palate works well.
"keeps" not "keepss"
"with" true love not "it" true love
and more
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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thanx for let me correct.next time i will keep ll these thing in my mind:)
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of getting the point across. The writers passion is revealed through the words as the same words paint a picture in the mind of the reader. My attention is captured and held to the end of the piece. Good.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
The writer does a good job of getting the point across. The writers passion is revealed through the words as the same words paint a picture in the mind of the reader. My attention is captured and held to the end of the piece. Good.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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thanx a lot