The Curse of 'Gator Bayou
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Voodoo Curses"A young Cajun girl struggles to survive.
6 total reviews
Comment from Gladness
Another good chapter with just a few nits:
having babies. "Evangeline (space in wrong place)
in New York. " (extra space)
Just some questions and observations:
I don't think women talked about sex that openly at that time. Then again, maybe some loose women did.
Did they have condoms then? I don't know when they were invented.
Story kept me interested, good work. Antia
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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Another good chapter with just a few nits:
having babies. "Evangeline (space in wrong place)
in New York. " (extra space)
Just some questions and observations:
I don't think women talked about sex that openly at that time. Then again, maybe some loose women did.
Did they have condoms then? I don't know when they were invented.
Story kept me interested, good work. Antia
Comment Written 03-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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Hi Anita, so glad you are following along with my story. Thank you for catching my goofs. I will fix them. Yes, condoms were not popular during WWI but became very popular in WWII. In fact, the military made an all out campaign for the soldiers with posters, films, etc. The average citizen might not have been as aware but anyone like Sally who was a rather loose person and liked to intertain the service men would have known about them. About sex talk...I think close friends...especially the ones who are cheating together would talk about sex. Their mothers would have been from the Roaring 20's generation and that was a pretty free time with morals for a lot of women and men.
Comment from kentuckywoman53
The chapter kept my interest from beginning to end. The story advanced well and created visuals from your wording. Nice job of building suspense in this chapter and for the chapters that will follow. Continued success!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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The chapter kept my interest from beginning to end. The story advanced well and created visuals from your wording. Nice job of building suspense in this chapter and for the chapters that will follow. Continued success!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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Thank you kentuckywoman for your continued encouragement. I am glad you are enjoying my story.
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You are welcome always.
Comment from Leen1
Wow! This is getting so intriguing, with every chapter written thus far you have pulled the reader in. Very well written. As a reviewer there is only one typo or is this statement meant to read: tangle you motor or tangle your motor. None-the-less it does not take away the excitement nor the wait for the next installment. Can't wait, as I do love a good storyline.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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Wow! This is getting so intriguing, with every chapter written thus far you have pulled the reader in. Very well written. As a reviewer there is only one typo or is this statement meant to read: tangle you motor or tangle your motor. None-the-less it does not take away the excitement nor the wait for the next installment. Can't wait, as I do love a good storyline.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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I am so glad you are enjoying my work. Thanks for catching the typo. Sometimes, my fingers have a mind of their own. :o) I tend to type really fast when "the flow" of the story hits me.
Comment from Bobby Jo
This has got me wondering what is going on. What about his wife, where is she? Is she really shopping with her friend? This kept my attention.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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This has got me wondering what is going on. What about his wife, where is she? Is she really shopping with her friend? This kept my attention.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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Read on Bobby Jo you will soon learn more about Evangeline. Isn't she a "sorry" cuss? :o)
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Thanks, is 8 out yet?
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Today or tomorrow. :o)
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ok!
Comment from kashmayank
I havent read all the chapters so wont look good to comment but this looks like a nice work good structure and flow all the best liked it
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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I havent read all the chapters so wont look good to comment but this looks like a nice work good structure and flow all the best liked it
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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I thank you for reading and reviewing my story. I am glad you liked it and hope you will come back and read more. :o)
Comment from Righteous Riter
This story grabs my attention from the start. The story holds my attention with the conversation of sex between two characters. The writer takes the reader else where as the writer does a good job of transitioning the events. The story is well balanced as the pace is nice and steady. The writer brings this chapter to an interesting ending as the writer sets up for the next chapter. I think he choked(smile) Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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This story grabs my attention from the start. The story holds my attention with the conversation of sex between two characters. The writer takes the reader else where as the writer does a good job of transitioning the events. The story is well balanced as the pace is nice and steady. The writer brings this chapter to an interesting ending as the writer sets up for the next chapter. I think he choked(smile) Good job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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Read on...thank you so much for your kind reviews and encouragement. I am thrilled that you are reading my story.
