Comment from Colette

Exceptional

What a beautiful poem, a joy to read, I am afraid I do not
understand the different forms of poetry but, most important,
I know what I like and enjoy to the full.
Thank you for sharing.

Colette

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thnks so much for the kind words and the six stars.

Steve

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading "Our Dream Come True". An excellent ocotogram with great rhyme, meter and I loved the repeating line. Great alliteration with wings of wind our wish, cosy cottage, and surrounds and swirls. Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thanks, Janet.

Steve

Comment from terry drake

Excellent

You have a nice bouncy beat that goes with this tale of happiness. Very appropriate in cadence and in rhyme to verify your message and the reality of the theme.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thanks, Terry

Steve

Comment from charlyann

Excellent

Wonderful, this one rocks..what a great style of poetry, I wish I had entered this one, perfect job on this..I enjoyed it very much...I love unsurpassed and deep and vast

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from Just2Write

Exceptional

I really liked this wish-borne home. So many of us dream about one for our very own. Yours sounds absolutely perfect. Great flow and cadence in this well-written Octogram. Rose.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thanks, Rose, and congrats on your win - your octogram obviously struck a chord with many readers - well done.

Steve

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

This piece meets the criteria of the Octogram poem. The syllable count is right as the message is clear. The rhyme scheme is effective as the rhyming is good. This piece flows well as my attention is captured from the beginning and held to the end. Nice job

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from Dave Russell

Exceptional

I have to say that this is an excellent example of an octogram. You nailed this completely and I cannot help but give you six stars for the effort. Well done!!

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thanks, dave - much appreciated.

Steve

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A lovely written and sentimental poem done in the Octogram format about that long desired dream cottage. Colorful imagery and lovely verse. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from Jina Sarma

Excellent

a special poem for me as i love dreams. your poem made me realize that how much dreams are special. you have written a poem which can inspire us to dream more.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from GarthL

Excellent

A very beautiful rendition of your dream home mate, illustrated appropriately. Some excellent imagery, it seems to have covered octogram criteria and is a very pleasant read rounded out with children's laughter, delightful!!
Thanks for the read I enjoyed it, stay well, Garth

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thanks, garth - not my usual style but I tried (unsuccessfully it turns out) to get into the voters' heads.

Steve

reply by GarthL on 28-Feb-2013

I thought it was good mate, delightful!!