Bedelia
a limerick158 total reviews
Comment from redrider6612
LOL! Excellent limerick, Brooke. So many people screw this form up, but you did a great job. The flow and rhythm is perfect, the rhymes natural, and best of all, the last line made me smile. Thanks for sharing :)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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LOL! Excellent limerick, Brooke. So many people screw this form up, but you did a great job. The flow and rhythm is perfect, the rhymes natural, and best of all, the last line made me smile. Thanks for sharing :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Diane, thank you so very much - yes, I've read some limerick clunkers myself. LOL I so appreciate your generous exceptional rating, which is most encouraging :-) Brooke
Comment from dmt1967
I can relate to her as I am still waiting for my prince charming to come as well lol well a girl can dream thank you for sharing well done
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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I can relate to her as I am still waiting for my prince charming to come as well lol well a girl can dream thank you for sharing well done
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you so very much, dmt :-) Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
What a great character face you've chosen for this limerick, and the black and white really adds to it. This one gave me a laugh, a very enjoyable limerick. You seem to do to perfection any form of poetry, they are always a good read.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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What a great character face you've chosen for this limerick, and the black and white really adds to it. This one gave me a laugh, a very enjoyable limerick. You seem to do to perfection any form of poetry, they are always a good read.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Pearl, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from mermaids
I like the message in your words, only the regular guys are out there. Limericks are not easy and you did an excellent job with this one, excellent rhyme and flow of words.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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I like the message in your words, only the regular guys are out there. Limericks are not easy and you did an excellent job with this one, excellent rhyme and flow of words.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Elaine, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from MizKat
Brooke - It looks like it paid off to stay up past your bedtime to write this as it is a very nice limerick. I see it's already become an All Time Best poem and is being featured. I doubt anyone could ask for anything better. Kat
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Brooke - It looks like it paid off to stay up past your bedtime to write this as it is a very nice limerick. I see it's already become an All Time Best poem and is being featured. I doubt anyone could ask for anything better. Kat
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Kat, thanks so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from October21
Loved that expression at the end
Great rhyming in the first two lines! Only you can think of a word to rhyme with "married"
A fun, light read, guess inspiration comes at weird times LOL!:-)
Enjoyed this very much Brooke:-)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Loved that expression at the end
Great rhyming in the first two lines! Only you can think of a word to rhyme with "married"
A fun, light read, guess inspiration comes at weird times LOL!:-)
Enjoyed this very much Brooke:-)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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October, thank you so very much :-) I truly appreciate your thoughtful review and generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Curt Mongold
That's what happens when you decide to hold out for the better ones, someone else has them already! Lovely limarick Brooke, I have a few I have made recently, but a little more...bawdy, shall we say?
Curt
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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That's what happens when you decide to hold out for the better ones, someone else has them already! Lovely limarick Brooke, I have a few I have made recently, but a little more...bawdy, shall we say?
Curt
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Curt, bawdy isn't really my style. LOL Thank you, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Winslow
Dear Brooke.
Ha, ha. For to expect too much is disasterous when trying to choose a mate. You will only wind up harried. (LOL)
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Dear Brooke.
Ha, ha. For to expect too much is disasterous when trying to choose a mate. You will only wind up harried. (LOL)
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Winslow, thank you, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from justjo66
A delightful picture of a face that appears very kind.
The limerick was fun to read and a little sad.
A kind face like this deserves another kind face to
go with hers.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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A delightful picture of a face that appears very kind.
The limerick was fun to read and a little sad.
A kind face like this deserves another kind face to
go with hers.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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just, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jmmercer
Very cute. I love a good limerick. Perhaps that's the Irish lass in me. ;). Well written and numerous. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Very cute. I love a good limerick. Perhaps that's the Irish lass in me. ;). Well written and numerous. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Jmmercer, thanks so much :-) Brooke
