The play full dog
A dog that loves to play2 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Little comfusing and hard to pick out the 5-7-5's. But I love the idea of him being hiper and the way you wrote this gives him the illusion of being just that. Cute
If you put :
look at my dog play
see how fast he runs and digs
then he sleeps with me
Look at the syllable count---(5-7-5)
this is all you need for this type of poem for this contest.
Add a picture of a dog and you have a good piece. Always read what is wanted for the contest. Or you can just write one without entering a contest. Two a day allowed. We will help you if you need it
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Little comfusing and hard to pick out the 5-7-5's. But I love the idea of him being hiper and the way you wrote this gives him the illusion of being just that. Cute
If you put :
look at my dog play
see how fast he runs and digs
then he sleeps with me
Look at the syllable count---(5-7-5)
this is all you need for this type of poem for this contest.
Add a picture of a dog and you have a good piece. Always read what is wanted for the contest. Or you can just write one without entering a contest. Two a day allowed. We will help you if you need it
Comment Written 25-Feb-2013
Comment from mumsyone
Oops! Your poem is not a 5-7-5. The 5-7-5 calls for 3 lines only, of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. I hope you can fix it so that it qualifies for the contest.
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Oops! Your poem is not a 5-7-5. The 5-7-5 calls for 3 lines only, of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. I hope you can fix it so that it qualifies for the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2013
