Along the Jericho Road
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Comment from judiverse
Very interesting and exciting chapter, Bev. I was interested in the fact that there's a tribal policeman who settles disputes among the members of the Indian Nation. The feud between the two brothers is a rather humorous diversion, but the big news comes with the discovery of a body. Apparently it's a white man, and Ty worries that it might be Fritz Buell, who's been missing, and his son has just offered a reward for information about what happened to him. Ty seems to be very careful. It'll be interesting how he coordinates with the Sheriff's Department. He'll have to share whatever he finds eventually. judi
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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Very interesting and exciting chapter, Bev. I was interested in the fact that there's a tribal policeman who settles disputes among the members of the Indian Nation. The feud between the two brothers is a rather humorous diversion, but the big news comes with the discovery of a body. Apparently it's a white man, and Ty worries that it might be Fritz Buell, who's been missing, and his son has just offered a reward for information about what happened to him. Ty seems to be very careful. It'll be interesting how he coordinates with the Sheriff's Department. He'll have to share whatever he finds eventually. judi
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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Hi, Judi. Thanks for the great review. There's a reservation about twenty miles from my home. They have their own police department and they have jurisdiction over the section of the state highway that passes through their reservation. It's a pretty interesting situation. You're right, it will be tricky to coordinate the departments.
Sure appreciate your support, as always.
Warmest regards, Bev
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You're welcome. That's so interesting. I didn't know they had their own law enforcement on the reservations. Makes sense, as they would know best what's going on there. judi
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Bev, as always you have penned a strong post for this story. This one didn't scare me as much:D Your dialogue and the way you penned this made it all seem so real.
Even the brothers fighting I thought you had done a fabulous job putting all the emotion as well as their character traits of handling it on their own. Felt like I was there.
My last sixer to you and a great job.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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Hi Bev, as always you have penned a strong post for this story. This one didn't scare me as much:D Your dialogue and the way you penned this made it all seem so real.
Even the brothers fighting I thought you had done a fabulous job putting all the emotion as well as their character traits of handling it on their own. Felt like I was there.
My last sixer to you and a great job.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 23-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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Maureen, thank you so very much for this very generous review and your kind words of support. I'm glad I didn't scare you! I sure appreciate your encouragement, my kind friend.
Hugs, Bev
