Comment from nora arjuna

Excellent

hi jan, what a lovely read your family poetry was. it was cute and sweet and so gently delivered. it made me smile and calm inside. :)

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2013

great, arjuna -- the poems that come when playing with Lexi just take on a life of their own -- love, jan

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

red head wants to play in snow
but her outfit makes her slow
little blond girl has a bird
king is waiting to be heard

You love it don't you Jan? You and Lexis playing with the dollies. Good write girl and please, don't let me disturb you.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2013

Oh, Gungalo, nobody can disturb me when I'm playing with Miss Lexi. Other than Christ, she is the best part of my life. Love, jan

reply by Gungalo on 03-Mar-2013

LOL girl.

Comment from seewhatimwritingnow

Excellent

This is a very cute poem. Easy to picture, through your creative words, the Nanny and child playing with these dolls there on the floor. I enjoyed this- Good Job! Betty

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

thanks so much - love, jan

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written my friend a very beautiful family scene painted a very enjoyable reads nothing better than playing with grandchildren well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

thanks so much - love, jan

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Rdfrdmom2
What cute poem love it and the fact that Lexi has so much fun with her nanny ( which I believe is you)

Love this part--

playing Barbies on the floor
with the child that I adore
"little people" all around
but they barely make a sound

Huge smiles
Gert

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

thanks so much - love, jan

reply by Gert sherwood on 06-Mar-2013

You are welcome jan
Gert

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

So lively and playful is your writing, but then children are that way. Imagination is what we had back then, no video games to steal that. Flows, rhymes beautifully. Well done. Thanks for sharing. Le

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

thanks so much - love, jan

Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

early morning rendezvous
as your nanny plays with you


This poetry transports the reader to playful and
fun place. The rhymes are perfect and it uses
non-confusing language making it easy to read and
understand. Thank You for your creation.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

thanks so much - love, jan

Comment from Gianinas

Excellent

The love for children is coming out of the page, sort of speak, in this poem dedicated to them and their little toys. It seems a sign of consumerism, how children have so many toys these days. Yet, they instill in little ones the sentiments and willingness to share, they stimulate imagination, and most of all, they can make for time well spent indeed, with the grown ups in their lives.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

thanks so much - love, jan

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Lexi is so lucky to have such a loving grandma to play with her. So many children aren't as lucky. I loved reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

thanks so much - love, jan

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Jan,

This is a cute poem that reminded me of all the playtime I had with my own kids when they were so small.
Well penned through out.

Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2013

thanks so much - love, jan