A night in slime
Slipping in slime at nifght2 total reviews
Comment from Candyjean
Well, your 5-7-5 poem is just perfect, and if you've walked at night in wash state you have walked on green slime in the for of slugs, it grosses me out. Had a great time reading your poem. Thanks
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Well, your 5-7-5 poem is just perfect, and if you've walked at night in wash state you have walked on green slime in the for of slugs, it grosses me out. Had a great time reading your poem. Thanks
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for the kind words
Comment from angelmagnet
I love 575. Perfect coloring. Simple. Wonder why you didn't make the first word of the last line "you" capital. I only ask because the first word of the first two lines were.Is there some method to your madness (I don't really mean that your rhyme is madness, it just kind of flowed)?
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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I love 575. Perfect coloring. Simple. Wonder why you didn't make the first word of the last line "you" capital. I only ask because the first word of the first two lines were.Is there some method to your madness (I don't really mean that your rhyme is madness, it just kind of flowed)?
Comment Written 19-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you sweet friend, well I just let the words flow from my mind, it came to me I put it down on paper.
