No Gentlemen Came Calling
two quatrains in 7/6/7/6208 total reviews
Comment from Deborah Marie
Lovely poem about your gandson and stunning photo of him. The beauty of your poem is in its clever wording. Excellent progression, rhythm and flow for a lovely read, indeed. Thanks for sharing, Deb
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Lovely poem about your gandson and stunning photo of him. The beauty of your poem is in its clever wording. Excellent progression, rhythm and flow for a lovely read, indeed. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Deb, thank you so very much for your encouraging comments and for your most generous exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Chickhabit
It was short, but very gentle, and told something very appealing. I enjoyed your word choice, and how the piece had a feeling of finality that so many lack.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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It was short, but very gentle, and told something very appealing. I enjoyed your word choice, and how the piece had a feeling of finality that so many lack.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you, Chickhabit, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from nankins
life's most precious moments are with people you love. This is brought out in such a nice way in your poem.Is that little boy your grandchild? God Bless
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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life's most precious moments are with people you love. This is brought out in such a nice way in your poem.Is that little boy your grandchild? God Bless
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Yes, Sawyer, the one in all my photos, is my grandson and my talented daughter Miranda is the photographer :-) Thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Lynn Moses
What a sweet poem for Sawyer. He seems to be providing some wonderful inspiration for you. I can see why! Very nice poem. I loved picturing the rainbow, gold and clover in my head. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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What a sweet poem for Sawyer. He seems to be providing some wonderful inspiration for you. I can see why! Very nice poem. I loved picturing the rainbow, gold and clover in my head. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Irmoses, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from MumEsGirl
What a joyful poem. There are many riches in this world and not all stem from money or romance.
As always a thoroughly enjoyable read my friend
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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What a joyful poem. There are many riches in this world and not all stem from money or romance.
As always a thoroughly enjoyable read my friend
hugs
kate
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Kate, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Dutchie
Such a sweet lovely poem for this little happy man.
I'm sure this feeling come from both sides.
What a joy to read!!! Fia
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Such a sweet lovely poem for this little happy man.
I'm sure this feeling come from both sides.
What a joy to read!!! Fia
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Fia, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
This reads like a little Valentine, and is of course darling. As always perfect rhythm and rhyme. Nice abcb rhyme scheme in these quatrains. So damn cute.
Rose.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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This reads like a little Valentine, and is of course darling. As always perfect rhythm and rhyme. Nice abcb rhyme scheme in these quatrains. So damn cute.
Rose.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Rose, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from alexisleech
That wee guy's getting cuter by the minute! He's enough to make anyone's heart leap. I love quatrains, so I enjoyed this very much. As always, perfect meter and rhyme with a touch of fun incorporated for good measure.
Alexis x
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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That wee guy's getting cuter by the minute! He's enough to make anyone's heart leap. I love quatrains, so I enjoyed this very much. As always, perfect meter and rhyme with a touch of fun incorporated for good measure.
Alexis x
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you so very much, Alexis - yep, cute he is and cuter he gets LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from justjo66
Aw, grandbaby love...isn't it so special. Your poem
is so special and filled with love. Your little one
is a cutie. I love that you listed the things that
most people think will bring them happiness but what makes
your heart leap is the very thought of your
grandson.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Aw, grandbaby love...isn't it so special. Your poem
is so special and filled with love. Your little one
is a cutie. I love that you listed the things that
most people think will bring them happiness but what makes
your heart leap is the very thought of your
grandson.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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thank you so much, just, for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from bayoupoet
What a precious and heart felt poem for such a darling
little boy. Nothing could be more important than that
infectious smile.
Many Blessings!
sandra
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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What a precious and heart felt poem for such a darling
little boy. Nothing could be more important than that
infectious smile.
Many Blessings!
sandra
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Sandra, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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You're very welcome,Brooke!
