Mumbo-Jumbo
By Gee this Trigee's a delight!98 total reviews
Comment from tedanytime
Tricky this Trigee. Congrats for winning contest.
The lines fulfill the rule with delightful dis-connection. ha
Your verse was better than others I saw. Somehow forgot to vote for any.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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Tricky this Trigee. Congrats for winning contest.
The lines fulfill the rule with delightful dis-connection. ha
Your verse was better than others I saw. Somehow forgot to vote for any.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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Thank you.
Steve
Comment from Bryana
Your poem was short but fun to read. I'm glad it
wasn't serious ... I love these..
Defying goblin, ghost or ghoul ... the cheeky cherub trots to school.
I will try to write one of these.
Thank you for the rules and information on this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Your poem was short but fun to read. I'm glad it
wasn't serious ... I love these..
Defying goblin, ghost or ghoul ... the cheeky cherub trots to school.
I will try to write one of these.
Thank you for the rules and information on this poem.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from DALLAS01
This my first exposure to this form. I have seen the cleave and I think that would take a lot of creativity and patience. Beyond my scope. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the smoothe transitions no matter how it is read.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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This my first exposure to this form. I have seen the cleave and I think that would take a lot of creativity and patience. Beyond my scope. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the smoothe transitions no matter how it is read.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
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You're welcome
Comment from mshugh
What a clever, entertaining piece of work. I had never known that such a format existed. Beautifully done
Really enjoyed this
Michael
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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What a clever, entertaining piece of work. I had never known that such a format existed. Beautifully done
Really enjoyed this
Michael
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you, Michael - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from Gungalo
Congratulatins Steve for winning this contest for the Trigee write. It's great and reminds me that there is humor in this world.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Congratulatins Steve for winning this contest for the Trigee write. It's great and reminds me that there is humor in this world.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
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Smile.
Comment from Carole Rosa
Steve, How clever! I've been a member of FanStory for over a year and I have never read a poem written like this. It must be difficult to compose this style of poem. I enjoyed and found it to be very pleasant to read. Carole
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Steve, How clever! I've been a member of FanStory for over a year and I have never read a poem written like this. It must be difficult to compose this style of poem. I enjoyed and found it to be very pleasant to read. Carole
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you, Carole - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I've never seen this poem before, but find it fascinating. Congratulations on your win. This is pleasant to read and I enjoyed it. Now to try one of my own~Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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I've never seen this poem before, but find it fascinating. Congratulations on your win. This is pleasant to read and I enjoyed it. Now to try one of my own~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you, Debbie - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written my friend and you were a worthy winner congrats I think I would get in a muddle with this form well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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This is very well written my friend and you were a worthy winner congrats I think I would get in a muddle with this form well done regards Jill
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you, Jill - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, kiwisteveh, you did an excellent job writing this trigee poem about the fantasies and imaginations of a mind seeking fun. congratulations on your win
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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this is very well written, kiwisteveh, you did an excellent job writing this trigee poem about the fantasies and imaginations of a mind seeking fun. congratulations on your win
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from Black_Oxygen
I like the way this poetry is formatted. It uses
non-confusing language making it easy to read
and understand. It held my interest from start
to finish. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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I like the way this poetry is formatted. It uses
non-confusing language making it easy to read
and understand. It held my interest from start
to finish. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
