Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Good

Planet's end poet could see, the mode and manner of mortal living is at stake, humanity warranted, no peace and real moral or humane living, well conveyed, good flow of thoughts and images, unfortunately there is dearth of visual projection on the whole.



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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013

thanx a lot for ur motivating comments and i promise to get better on it ..specially those ideas are captured from my real life experience of those social culprits and lack of awareness in peoples ,,they believe truely in god but dont scared of him otherwise they never commit such crime of female infaticides..

Comment from Zadakeem

Average

Excellent way to make a point with words. "Its time to think, its time to stand" has power. I liked it. Although it felt a little lacking in eloquence.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013

i must consider ur comments nd try to improve my skills .thnx

reply by Zadakeem on 19-Feb-2013

Your power and words were very strong. It just seemed you would have more strength if you were more eloquent in your approach. A man would have to think twice about your words especially if accompanied by a smooth approach. Does that make sense?

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013

yes it is.. it need much diliquent approach and what i feel in our country specially .theme of my poem is all about d social culprits who took name of god but dont fear of him..