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Savannah Love

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Comment from elgone
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Some old ways are slow to die. It's difficult to change beliefs, especially when they have been reinforced for years. I grew up on a farm and played with black kids who were the children of one of dad's hired hands.Even though it was in Ohio, it was the sixties and there was plenty of racism around.

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review. I grew up with racism too. I was in IL, and Blacks weren't allowed in my town.
Comment from Rondeno
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Oh, wow. Collision course. While very few people would actually advocate "apartheid", there is something to be said for the South maintaining its cultural traditions. Paige may need to adapt ...

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
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Barbara,

The chapter advances the story line at a good pace. Paige is becoming acquainted with the 'social system' of the South, and she doesn't like it. Seeing her adjust or not to the system will continue to add suspense to the story.

I enjoyed the read and look forward to the next chapter.

Curtis

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from hurkad
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I think I have to read the previous chapters now. Really liked this and your style of writing. It has good flow. Will catch up with the other chapters soon

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dollie Mason
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Very nice job here, kept my interest and flowed very well. Love the North & Southnaspect of looking to find that love, thats great. Will now have to go back and read some mor eof the other chapters. Thanks

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
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Boy it seems as if everyone s trying to tell her how to live her life. It certainly comes off that way anyhow. Wonder what Cash has to say about it?

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Gungalo on 10-Feb-2013
    Smile.
Comment from c_lucas
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You have a very good post. The racial issue is a hard one to eradicate. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
reply by c_lucas on 10-Feb-2013
    You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where nala sits with paige for lunch but eats her own food, she feeds to puppy so he won't develop bad habits. he doesn't like dr. walker and neither does paige after her hears her talking with nala.

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.