Savannah Love
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Comment from Hareem.S
This is an intersting chapter. Though I have not read the earlier ones, it still held my interest. Very vividly penned down with good dialogues.
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This is an intersting chapter. Though I have not read the earlier ones, it still held my interest. Very vividly penned down with good dialogues.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from chasennov
'Chapter 18 part2.' This is as good a chapter as you will ever write. It has good depth and makes a lot of sense. It is well structured and well written. I liked reading it. Well done.
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'Chapter 18 part2.' This is as good a chapter as you will ever write. It has good depth and makes a lot of sense. It is well structured and well written. I liked reading it. Well done.
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are most welcome to my review.
Comment from nora arjuna
hi barb. this was an enjoyable chapter to read with all the appropriate scenes and dialogues. i got a sprained ankle myself after tripping down the stairs at my mother's.
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hi barb. this was an enjoyable chapter to read with all the appropriate scenes and dialogues. i got a sprained ankle myself after tripping down the stairs at my mother's.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Please be careful. I am concerned how long the swelling lasts, Please let me know. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
Good for Paige for standing up for what's right and not
allowing the "good doctor" to intimidate her friend, Nala,
even if Nala also works for her. None of us should
automatically accept the customs of a area if we know
they are not right.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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barbara:
Good for Paige for standing up for what's right and not
allowing the "good doctor" to intimidate her friend, Nala,
even if Nala also works for her. None of us should
automatically accept the customs of a area if we know
they are not right.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from mshugh
Good use of dialogue to tell the story, but may need to extend some sections to expand the concept (that is only a personal preference)
Need to read from Chapter 1 in order to flesh out the imagery in my mind before I can provide meaningful feed back other than grammer and spelling
Michael
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Good use of dialogue to tell the story, but may need to extend some sections to expand the concept (that is only a personal preference)
Need to read from Chapter 1 in order to flesh out the imagery in my mind before I can provide meaningful feed back other than grammer and spelling
Michael
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from muezza56
a well written intriguing story, about how southern social ways are different to the north, in the sense that the south dont 'mix' with lower classes, and anyone that challenges these rules are likely to suffer consequences, good read
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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a well written intriguing story, about how southern social ways are different to the north, in the sense that the south dont 'mix' with lower classes, and anyone that challenges these rules are likely to suffer consequences, good read
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MENNIPLOSS
It is a very interesting chapter and atrapante for the reader, I like your writing, am beautiful, pleasing and always a fresh air. It is a pleasure to read yourself, a strong embrace and a lot of congratulations.
menniploss
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It is a very interesting chapter and atrapante for the reader, I like your writing, am beautiful, pleasing and always a fresh air. It is a pleasure to read yourself, a strong embrace and a lot of congratulations.
menniploss
Comment Written 12-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review
Comment from abbasjoy
Dwayne just makes my blood boil. It may be the way of the South but he doesn't own Paige, and Nala is not his servant.
This chapter is very well written illustrating clearly the social disparity between Paige and Nala as far as the South is concerned.
Paige's kind personality and lack of prejudice is clearly portrayed, and the reader immediately warms to her way of seeing things. At the same time we also get the impression Dwayne is a dangerous character and one to be wary of.
Well done!
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Dwayne just makes my blood boil. It may be the way of the South but he doesn't own Paige, and Nala is not his servant.
This chapter is very well written illustrating clearly the social disparity between Paige and Nala as far as the South is concerned.
Paige's kind personality and lack of prejudice is clearly portrayed, and the reader immediately warms to her way of seeing things. At the same time we also get the impression Dwayne is a dangerous character and one to be wary of.
Well done!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure. It's a great story.
Comment from Bobby Jo
This has a good story plot to it, but it feels a little hard to follow. I wasn't for sure why Cash's mother gave her the number to the vet they used. It had me wondering if Cash was a child. It could be because I haven't read the whole story. The end has me on edge though, and wanting to find out what will happen when Billy and Cash pay Dwayne a visit. Keep wriiting, I'm curious!
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This has a good story plot to it, but it feels a little hard to follow. I wasn't for sure why Cash's mother gave her the number to the vet they used. It had me wondering if Cash was a child. It could be because I haven't read the whole story. The end has me on edge though, and wanting to find out what will happen when Billy and Cash pay Dwayne a visit. Keep wriiting, I'm curious!
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Welcome to FS. Yes, you would know what's going on if you had read the previous chapters. I am half way through the book. I am glad you were able to get the member cents attached to this story.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
This is a very enjoyable chapter in which you created suspense. As always, your dialogue are very natural and casual. I just love the images of this chocolate Labrador puppy!
GOOD JOB Barbara!
:)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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This is a very enjoyable chapter in which you created suspense. As always, your dialogue are very natural and casual. I just love the images of this chocolate Labrador puppy!
GOOD JOB Barbara!
:)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review
