Morning Love.
Echo style.73 total reviews
Comment from drivenbackward
I read a lot of poems with this topic, but your delivery is very unique. I appreciate the creativity. Well done. Enjoyed. No errors to report.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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I read a lot of poems with this topic, but your delivery is very unique. I appreciate the creativity. Well done. Enjoyed. No errors to report.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much driven , very encouraging comment. Pili
Comment from James Dooney
I must say that I do quite like this one ! It appears to be disjointed yet is actually all well held together ! good job here !
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I must say that I do quite like this one ! It appears to be disjointed yet is actually all well held together ! good job here !
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much James , love your comment....
Comment from royowen
A very cleverly composed work, brilliantly exuding repeated end of line rhymes, I love the idea and the inspiration, also adored the poem's unmissable message, and it's kindly lack of ambiguity, well done, I loved it, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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A very cleverly composed work, brilliantly exuding repeated end of line rhymes, I love the idea and the inspiration, also adored the poem's unmissable message, and it's kindly lack of ambiguity, well done, I loved it, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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So happy Roy that you like it, great meaningful comment, thank you. Pili
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You're welcome,
Comment from livelylinda
Pili Pubul: I have never seen this form before but it is marvelous. Makes the reader stop and think about every line they have just read. And the read was beautiful and such an explosive picture! A perfect combination and thrilling read. Linda
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Pili Pubul: I have never seen this form before but it is marvelous. Makes the reader stop and think about every line they have just read. And the read was beautiful and such an explosive picture! A perfect combination and thrilling read. Linda
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much my friend for your fabulous comment and shiny six star. Glad you like it..... Pili
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Morning Love' is an extremely well-written and semi-erotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. White silk sheets are sheer bliss!
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'Morning Love' is an extremely well-written and semi-erotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. White silk sheets are sheer bliss!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you Duchess , wonderful comment. Pili
Pili. you're very welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess
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Smiles... Pili
Pili, you definitely deserved the wonderful comment.
Best wishes, the Duchess
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Big smiles ... Pili
Comment from kiwigirl2821
It's an interesting format. I like the presentation and the unusual way you draw your reader into the write. Love it when I find something I've never seen before. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
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It's an interesting format. I like the presentation and the unusual way you draw your reader into the write. Love it when I find something I've never seen before. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much kiwi , great comment. Pili
Comment from mikemagine
Nature's welcoming...We too often overlook it. We get caught up in competing and wasting time. We don't listen to our inner, higher selves. There really is so much in LIFE! But too often we miss it by trying to keep up with the proverbial Jones.' We have at least five senses, but do we fulfill them??
Thanks for sharing!
Mike
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Nature's welcoming...We too often overlook it. We get caught up in competing and wasting time. We don't listen to our inner, higher selves. There really is so much in LIFE! But too often we miss it by trying to keep up with the proverbial Jones.' We have at least five senses, but do we fulfill them??
Thanks for sharing!
Mike
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much Mike for your interesting review. Pili
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You bet!
Comment from Emily George
What a wonderful pattern to choose for a rhyme it's the first time I've seen it done. The last word of each line used in some form to tie the second line. Extremely creative.
Em.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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What a wonderful pattern to choose for a rhyme it's the first time I've seen it done. The last word of each line used in some form to tie the second line. Extremely creative.
Em.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so very much Emily for a great comment and shiny six star. Pili
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows a definitons of love. I like the way each short line is formed by the last syllable of the line before and is all so an emotioned expressed from the line before it.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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This shows a definitons of love. I like the way each short line is formed by the last syllable of the line before and is all so an emotioned expressed from the line before it.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for your meaningful comment. Pili
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No problem. It is what we're all here for. To give and recieve comments.
Joan
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This reminds me of camping and just being alone with yourself away from the real world. Oh how I would love to go camping...next year...next year.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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This reminds me of camping and just being alone with yourself away from the real world. Oh how I would love to go camping...next year...next year.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Interesting comment , thank you so much ... Hope you can do it soon... Smiles. Pili
