Morning Love.
Echo style.73 total reviews
Comment from Dawny53
Not only was I impressed by this echo form of poetry.. which I don't believe I've seen before, or perhaps forgotten.. I was also impressed with your usage of it, all words complimenting each other perfectly.. and oh my gosh the echo of it all! Beautiful!!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Not only was I impressed by this echo form of poetry.. which I don't believe I've seen before, or perhaps forgotten.. I was also impressed with your usage of it, all words complimenting each other perfectly.. and oh my gosh the echo of it all! Beautiful!!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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You humble me Dawny, thank you for your very encouraging comment. Pili
Comment from tfawcus
I find this style of poem a bit contrived. The result is clever rather than compelling. Having said that, you have managed a remarkably cohesive flow from one line to the next. Some of the longer lines are just marvellous ('so tender hold me tight asserting a relation' and 'over soft white silk sheets in sweet arrest' being two of my favourites).
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I find this style of poem a bit contrived. The result is clever rather than compelling. Having said that, you have managed a remarkably cohesive flow from one line to the next. Some of the longer lines are just marvellous ('so tender hold me tight asserting a relation' and 'over soft white silk sheets in sweet arrest' being two of my favourites).
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much my friend for a meaningful review. Pili
Comment from nomi338
This is new for me. I like it. I love the fact that on this site the writer are not bound the things that are casr in stone and hard coded rules. Creative freedom is the order of the day and all who are able to share are the better for it. Thank you for this wonderful contribution.
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This is new for me. I like it. I love the fact that on this site the writer are not bound the things that are casr in stone and hard coded rules. Creative freedom is the order of the day and all who are able to share are the better for it. Thank you for this wonderful contribution.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much Nomi for a very meaningful comment. Pili
Comment from amada
Thank you for introducing me to this style. New to me. I also enjoyed the meaning of the lines and their underlining message. lessings.
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Thank you for introducing me to this style. New to me. I also enjoyed the meaning of the lines and their underlining message. lessings.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much Amada for a great comment. Pili
Comment from TKField
Yes, very interesting echo style...know what I mean, mean mean, mean? And it rhymes too! The lines end and begin simultaneously. Ingenious, really. Mind if I stea...I mean borrow your idea. This was subjective and emotional. It all about the connection of love, nature and subjective introspection...spection, spection, spection. I liked it.
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Yes, very interesting echo style...know what I mean, mean mean, mean? And it rhymes too! The lines end and begin simultaneously. Ingenious, really. Mind if I stea...I mean borrow your idea. This was subjective and emotional. It all about the connection of love, nature and subjective introspection...spection, spection, spection. I liked it.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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LOL, glad you find it interesting, thank you so much TK, you certainly can borrow anything ... Pili
Comment from Eric1
Hi Pili, this is a wonderfully written poem my friend Fantastic how the last word shortened becomes the first word. great description and imagery my friend.
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Hi Pili, this is a wonderfully written poem my friend Fantastic how the last word shortened becomes the first word. great description and imagery my friend.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much Eric , great comment . Pili
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You are welcome my friend
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Smiles... Pili
Comment from victor 66
This would have been an interesting poem to enter in FS's LIGHT AND SWEET contest. I feel it fulfills all requirements. For me, it was a gentle, easy read that made me smile and feel better. Thank you.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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This would have been an interesting poem to enter in FS's LIGHT AND SWEET contest. I feel it fulfills all requirements. For me, it was a gentle, easy read that made me smile and feel better. Thank you.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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That is so nice of you to say, thank you so much Victor. Pili
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You are most welcome, Pili.
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Smiles...
Comment from TAB_that's me
I have never seen this echo form but I really like it:) It is nicely done and has a smooth flow to it. Great imagery.
teresa
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I have never seen this echo form but I really like it:) It is nicely done and has a smooth flow to it. Great imagery.
teresa
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much TAB, great comment . Pili
Comment from PatVallesMangan
I really enjoyed echo style poetry. This is the first I have seen it and it is a very nice effect. "Charms, arms; abound, bound ..." The author seems to have chosen just the right words to compliment this style of poetry. Well done I truly enjoyed! ~ Pat
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I really enjoyed echo style poetry. This is the first I have seen it and it is a very nice effect. "Charms, arms; abound, bound ..." The author seems to have chosen just the right words to compliment this style of poetry. Well done I truly enjoyed! ~ Pat
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much Pat, love your comment. Pili
Comment from ravenblack
I really like your techie poem, the sense of each line carried over to the next , the meaning shaded/loaded with each echo. Express- and how to you go about it? Your dreams express nature's beauty pressed to you in the embrace of loving arms.
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I really like your techie poem, the sense of each line carried over to the next , the meaning shaded/loaded with each echo. Express- and how to you go about it? Your dreams express nature's beauty pressed to you in the embrace of loving arms.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you my friend , great comment . Pili
