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My Fan Kady

Professor Higgins strikes out

36 total reviews 
Comment from Titanx9
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Thanks for the cerebral and humorous satire. I like the saccharin beginning from both of you that gradually descends into a downward spiral of acrimony and animus. I loved it. You made my afternoon, I loved it!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
    Thanks, brother! I like the quotes on your page. God bless, Dennis
Comment from Ted T
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Hi Dennis :)

It could've been a fun read if had been trimmed by sixty percent. Perhaps tedious was your intent. If so, you have a winner with the piece.

If the exchanges were real someone would've been restricted.

Ted

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
    "If the exchanges were real someone would've been restricted". Duh. They weren't real so what's the point? And you alone have called tedious. And why would "tedious" be an aim?
reply by Ted T on 06-Feb-2013
    No offense, just an observation.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
    Sorry. I apologize. Thanks for reviewing.
reply by Ted T on 07-Feb-2013
    Okay, but really no need :)
Comment from muezza56
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what an absolutely mad story and a great read. the interaction between the two is vicious on an ascending scale. an interesting read for us neutrals

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
    Lotta fun showing the quick slide from the Mount of admiration to the Valley of trash in our electronically connected world .. Glad you like it!
Comment from jjstar
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Good God, Dennis. You scared the crap out of me. First I thought I missed a bunch of your writing, which I was very ashamed of. Then I thought that you guys were having a real down and dirty. I was stunned because it seemed so real. I know that some people write some satire and rather insulting things about FS. I was surprised at you. So glad it's just a story. I don't know Kade. I know she has reviewed me not and again, so I just didn't know what to make of it!

Great fun, you two!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
    Wow! it was all in fun! Based on some bad experiences we've all had I'm sure ... I'm surprised you didn't catch on in the beginning! I know you're really shook 'cause you dropped your editor's pen! LOL

    Kcross11 is great fun and with my help she will be as great as you one day! :) Dennis AKA Professor Higgins
reply by jjstar on 06-Feb-2013
    hahahaha..yep. You got me..hehehe
Comment from DIS-illusioned
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"Professor Higgins strikes out"
Oh boy!
"My Fan Kady didn't make the recent FS prompt"
Do you mean contesting or voting in it?
"Sadly, most of Kady's writings now are of a legal nature."
LOL! D'uh! You two should get a room already. It's obvious, even to the statue of a blind guy, that you're both in love with, and meant for, each other. Bwahahaha!
Blimey, 'Iggins, this was one 'elluva wooing banter and expos-e on ya nature. Jesus woulda been so proud to 'ear such spiritual stimulation in ya words, me thinks. LOL!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
    Dis baby, more than beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
reply by DIS-illusioned on 06-Feb-2013
    Okay, calm down, Denny boy; I really don't fancy you like that. Your kind are not my type...horror writers. LOL! :)
Comment from ZBaron
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Wow, this was a pleasure to read. What a heated exchange, fictional or not. I really got a kick out of this. What a lovely piece of satire that was well written on all fronts. I'm sure everyone has had to deal with this in some form or another, real or not, so this was a relevant piece that I certainly laughed at. If it weren't for the 'satire fiction' tag I could swear it was a real exchange, which just speaks to how well it was written. I'm sure others are going to miss that fiction tag and respond as if this was real, which should make for some interesting reviews. Well done.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
    Thank you for reading and commenting, you're appreciated. You bring up an interesting point about the labeling. Personally, I pay little attention to such labels either when applying to my own efforts or those of others. But perhaps I should change that habit since I've been puzzled that a few reviewers seemed to question whether it was real or fiction, much to my surprise!

    Kcross11 is a very real, wonderful person. These exchanges were written in response to each other and the response was all ours. We knew the direction in which we were going but not what the other was going to say. It was great fun! Glad you liked it! Dennis
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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I'm glad this is fictional, and it's very witty and entertaining! LOL! I love how it developed from a mutual admiration to a mutual hatred... LOL! Verrrry clever. Deserving of a prize in some universe anyway! You two did an outstanding job with this. :)

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
    You TWO? I carried her! LOL Thank you Phyllis, this is high praise indeed coming from you! Kcross11 is a great partner and lots of fun to work with. I still laugh at some of her lines even though I've read them any number of times. And I'm glad you realize it is all fictional as believe it or not, some reviewers were not sure on that score! (sigh) Thanks again, we appreciate your comments and six. Dennis
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Oh this was the best satire I have read to date, anywhere! Absolutely brilliant, and I wouldn't even think of trying to single out one phrase over another (because I would spend the whole night re-writing the whole thing)! You need absolutely NO advice from me about ANYthing, so here's all I can offer - I LOVED IT! And my profuse apologies for not having the six it so richly deserves!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
    Ahem. I assume you mean my entries were brilliant responses to the crude attempts at defaming me by HER? LOL Glad you loved it! Better than six anytime. It was fun to do and I grudgingly admit that kcross11 is wonderful. But after all, isn't grudging admiration the best after all? Your comments are special, always! Thanks agin, Dennis and HER
reply by Dawn Munro on 05-Feb-2013
    LOL - need I say it was my extreme pleasure? (And I am not, just now, heading to kcross11's profile page to have a gander...honestly...)
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
    Can I rust you? The woman is, is, ... well just be careful. I know you are all sisters and you WILL go there ... but I don't think she likes me. Be careful! Dennis shhhhhhhhhhh
reply by Dawn Munro on 05-Feb-2013
    I'd rather be 'golded' than 'rusted'...egads, I just reviewed a reply!!! (There's no hope for me...well, at least I never deduct stars...I just skip.)LOL
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
    I saw that "rusted" just as I clicked send. LOL Thanks for your forbearence! LOL
reply by Dawn Munro on 05-Feb-2013
    LOL
Comment from gypsycaravan
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Yes, It was great fun reading this satire. So many times you want to say some of these very words but refrain and thank the reviewer instead. LOL It was a darling piece and worth it for all Fan Storians to read. Congratulations.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
    Thank you! I just reviewed your wonderful Electronic Harmony so am even more appreciative of your comments.
Comment from Sasha
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Oh my, you had me rolling on the floor with this one. I know it is fiction but is it okay to pretend it is real. I just loved how it slowly spiraled from gushy praise to painful quips and possibly a Swiss knife jab. Very, very funny. Thanks so much for the laughter. Where are the 6's when you really need one?

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
    Thanks Smurphgirl! Praise from you is sweet indeed. And remember, I did it all carrying Kady on my back! Please don't tell her I said that or I will pay! LOL Dennis
reply by Sasha on 05-Feb-2013
    This is one I plan to reread many times. It is full of precious gems that I am sure will make me laugh again and again.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
    Awesome! Adewpearl (sp?) just left a message on my profile re you saying that you have been one of her favorites for years! Cool beans!
reply by Sasha on 05-Feb-2013
    I love Brooke's poetry and I have teased her for years about NOT understanding all the complicated and convoluted rules of the all too many styles. She is also an excellent editor, something I need desperately. I know I make her laugh and that's what makes me smile.
reply by Sasha on 05-Feb-2013
    I meant to add I actually took one of her classes and flunked. She insists I didn't, but I failed miserably.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
    Smiles are where it's at!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
    Sounds like you could do a ramble on that one! :)