Blankets
Loving the muffled moment31 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
never would have thought to write a poem on yarn. you really take something that is mundane and give it sacred weight. I particularly like the line " the mundane and the meaningful undulating unbound." think about deleting the last two lines. in a way, they subvert the poem. you have stated that yarn is sacred - that is enough. don't need to second guess it.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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never would have thought to write a poem on yarn. you really take something that is mundane and give it sacred weight. I particularly like the line " the mundane and the meaningful undulating unbound." think about deleting the last two lines. in a way, they subvert the poem. you have stated that yarn is sacred - that is enough. don't need to second guess it.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Thank you Ravenblack for the inspiring and delightful review to my work.
Comment from charlyann
Very nice indeed, I love the look of this, the way it's structured, it reads very well, and the simple topic is appealing well done
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Very nice indeed, I love the look of this, the way it's structured, it reads very well, and the simple topic is appealing well done
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thank you charlyann for this very inspiring review.
Comment from words
I like your lyrical write on yarn.
How imaginative.
I especially liked:The mundane and the meaningful undulating unbound
From a simple ball of yarn
A simple layer
Resounding abundance.
Lovely.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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I like your lyrical write on yarn.
How imaginative.
I especially liked:The mundane and the meaningful undulating unbound
From a simple ball of yarn
A simple layer
Resounding abundance.
Lovely.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thank you Diana. I appreciate your kind and supportive review.
Comment from Glasstruth
Well, this is the first poem I ever read about a ball of yarn. Like how centered it. My favorite:
"I like the way it clasps the totality of who I am
It pause me into the muffled moment
And cast dreams of pink springs
In wan winter nights."
And also your evidence to what you write is the truth:
"Babies know it
Cats know it
I know it too..."
Well done! Good luck with the contest! Les
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Well, this is the first poem I ever read about a ball of yarn. Like how centered it. My favorite:
"I like the way it clasps the totality of who I am
It pause me into the muffled moment
And cast dreams of pink springs
In wan winter nights."
And also your evidence to what you write is the truth:
"Babies know it
Cats know it
I know it too..."
Well done! Good luck with the contest! Les
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thank you Les. I really appreciate your insightful and supportive review.
Comment from October21
Indeed they can be just a ball of yarn. But we can have fun with them and different people and things see it in different ways. Great work on this piece.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Indeed they can be just a ball of yarn. But we can have fun with them and different people and things see it in different ways. Great work on this piece.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thank you for reading and for liking my work.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I agree, I have many croqueted afghans and they are beautiful, I don't let anyone wrap themselves in the one as it is white with deep maroon roses and I don't what it getting ruined. This is well done, I wish you good success with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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I agree, I have many croqueted afghans and they are beautiful, I don't let anyone wrap themselves in the one as it is white with deep maroon roses and I don't what it getting ruined. This is well done, I wish you good success with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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I used to crochet but never a dared to do a afghans, just dollies and so. Thank you so much for reading and connecting with my work.
Comment from finaldraft
Beautifully written and so true. Adults can have their security blanket, also. There is too a bit of humor. I'll be looking for you. Great work.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Beautifully written and so true. Adults can have their security blanket, also. There is too a bit of humor. I'll be looking for you. Great work.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thank you for this six stars! Awesome, thank you.
Comment from RYME4U
Very good tribute to yarn and blankets.You have shown here the safe and comfortable feeling on gets when all snuggled in. Your alliteration is well done and the descriptive feelings are expressed well.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Very good tribute to yarn and blankets.You have shown here the safe and comfortable feeling on gets when all snuggled in. Your alliteration is well done and the descriptive feelings are expressed well.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your supportive review to my work.
Comment from Charlene0513
You can tell you certainly love to knit even crochet.
The peace and relaxation it provides you is pretty hard to match.
Nice use of enveloping alliteration into your metaphors is undeniable.
Great interpretation.
Charlene
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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You can tell you certainly love to knit even crochet.
The peace and relaxation it provides you is pretty hard to match.
Nice use of enveloping alliteration into your metaphors is undeniable.
Great interpretation.
Charlene
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Charlene, thank you so much for reading my work and commenting in my work.
Comment from Kim Wright
This brought a smile to my face. Thanks. The line, I like the way it clasps the totality of who I am, has deep meaning. Like you are one with yarn. I don't share your fascination but I enjoyed your explanation of it. Great job.
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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This brought a smile to my face. Thanks. The line, I like the way it clasps the totality of who I am, has deep meaning. Like you are one with yarn. I don't share your fascination but I enjoyed your explanation of it. Great job.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thank you Kim for reading and commenting in my work.
