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It Has To Be

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Comment from mumsyone
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I was never much of a disco fan, but it's easy to see how you would get caught up in the lights and the music.

Description: As I walk in to (into) the room

To release all Inabitions (inhabitions)

My body now Moves (moves)

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
    Thank you mumsyone for your advice
Comment from Illumination
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LOL! I love this poem. Takes me right back to my Disco days as was the challenge for the poet. Wedgers, teddy-boys and baby-cham...Classic. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
    Thanks