Comment from nora arjuna

Excellent

hi jan, wow, i love the picture! very creative indeed. and it matches your fun and upbeat poem really well. hope it was a nice one for your lexi and all. :)

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013

arjuna -- it was a great one - sorry it has taken me so long to respond, love, jan

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

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Birthdays are always fun or should be no matter what age you are. I think I still get just as excited as I did when I was four. LOL. I hope Lexi never gets tired of them either :)

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013

I hope she never does, either, my friend - sorry it has taken me so long to respond, love, jan

Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

birthday party joys
gymnastics, presents and friends
life is really good

With very few words, this poetry transports the
reader to a happy place. Thank You for your
creation.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013

thanks, Black_Oxygen - sorry it has taken me so long to respond, love, jan

Comment from Anisa-

Excellent

Hah, isn't that the truth. Birthday parties were so much fun as a child! They still are now, but not quite the same... Lol.

A

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013

thanks, Anisa - sorry it has taken me so long to respond, love, jan

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Jan, another sweet poem to go into Lexis's book. It is
fun getting to watch our grandkids grow up. Great job
on the 5-7-5 poem. Syllable count right on.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013

thanks, jude - sorry it has taken me so long to respond, love, jan

Comment from yonashalom

Excellent

This reminds me of a party as a child. Our gymnastics was in the yard in the grass. We loved to do cartwheels. :) Presents, cake... this brings many images to mind. Old memories. :) ~Yona

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013

thanks, Yona - sorry it has taken me so long to respond, love, jan

Comment from amarherig14

Excellent

She is going to enjoy the party , her friends and the presents. She is probably going to pre-school and meet more friends.Happy Birthday,Lexi! This is a sweet poem for your adorable granddaughter who you love so much.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013

she'll go to preschool next year -- sorry it has taken me so long to respond, love, jan

reply by amarherig14 on 08-Mar-2013

Jan, it's okay. Whenever you have the time, no rush. Sweet Lexi, has grown ,time for pre-school.Love, Margie

Comment from barbara.wilkey

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What wonderful 4th birthday wish for your granddaughter. I hope you are saving these wonderful poem for her. When she grows up, she will cherish them.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2013

yes, trying to get them into scrapbook form for her -- want to add pictures of her to it - sorry it has taken me so long to respond, love, jan

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Jan, great birthday 5-7-5, spot on syllables.
So Happy Birthday to Lexis:)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

"birthday party joys 5
gymnastics, presents and friends 7
life is really good 5

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013

thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan

Comment from October21

Excellent

Ah! Wow! It's very weird that you posted this and I am reading it at this time. It's my birthday today and makes sense. Life is always good when it is ones birthday:-)

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013

thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan