Shooting Star
when you wish upon ...32 total reviews
Comment from cephira
A beautiful portrait of a shooting star as the wishes, hopes, and dreams drip. A wonderful contest entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Best of luck!
Cephira
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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A beautiful portrait of a shooting star as the wishes, hopes, and dreams drip. A wonderful contest entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Best of luck!
Cephira
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thanks, Cephira - Glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o) starkat
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Excellent 's' alliteration and 's' sounds, Art
Top mixture here of vivid imagery of the reflection in the lake, plus whimsy last line, well 'd' alliterated well too.
Overall, an excellent post.
Best wishes, Ray
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Excellent 's' alliteration and 's' sounds, Art
Top mixture here of vivid imagery of the reflection in the lake, plus whimsy last line, well 'd' alliterated well too.
Overall, an excellent post.
Best wishes, Ray
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thanks for the wonderful review, Ray.
Hey, you were my very first reviewer on this post. (the early bird catches the worm). Do appreciate you pointing out poetic devices in this 5-7-5 and very glad you liked the imagery and especially the whirl of whimsy in the last line.
Appreciate all your comments ... ;o) Art
