Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

This piece is short, sweet, to the point and the message is clear. Beautiful photo plus colorful words equal an excellent piece. Good job.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013

Thanks RR - Glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 and the picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o) sk

Comment from Deniz22

Excellent

Nice, clean, poignant shot across the FanStory literary heavens. Beautiful picture enhances but does not overwhelm the words. Great job.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013

Glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5, and the picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Exceptional

This is a lovely haiku-like 5-7-5, Art, with stunning visual imagery. What a wonderful last line: "wishes drip with dreams." It brings heaven down to earth. Good luck to you. Best regards, Jeanie

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013

Ah Jeanie - thanks again for the wonderful review and special rating! Love your take on that last line - it brings heaven down to earth ... ;o)

Comment from charlyann

Excellent

This is great ...nice take on a 5-7-5 poem...great picture..last line is lovely...good job and best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013

Thanks, charlyann - Glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 and the picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

shooting star stretches
within clear lake's reflection
wishes drip with dreams

With very few words, this poetry transports the
reader to a wondrous place. Thank You for your
creation.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013

Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from wiljacro

Excellent

HI! starkat/Bearing in mind the number of people that wish upon shooting stars, you have told the tale very well in only 17 syllables plus a perfect picture accompaniment. Well done you! wiljacro.
P.S. It would have been a6 but I've none left to give. w.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013

Thanks, wiljacro. So glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 and the picture. Appreciate all your comments and the thought of a 'sixer'. Yes, those shooting stars are carrying lots of wishes which might return to earth one day as dreams coming true ... ;o) sk

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is a good poem I like the shooting star and wishing for a star theme very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013

Thanks dmt1967. Glad you liked the theme of this 5-7-5. Appreciate your comments and good luck wishes ... ;o)

Comment from linsbm

Excellent

Perfect syllable count of 5-7-5 poem.
Superb imagery in word pictures.
Very creative in the use of alliteration in 'S' and 'D'.
Excellent write. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem and its imagery. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Gorgeous pairing of poem and art
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
nice alliteration in star stretches
and drip with dreams
You create a beautiful scene that is both easy and inviting to visualize and you create a truly dreamy mood :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013

Thanks for the wonderful review, Brooke. So glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 and artwork. Appreciate all your comments, especially the one about creating a truly dreamy mood ... ;o) Art

Comment from Amused

Excellent

Very nice! Imagery is beautiful and the artwork you selected is a perfect pairing. How often I have looked upon the lake and sent my wishes to the stars. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013

Thanks Amused. So glad you enjoyed this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)