Comment from angel of the quill

Excellent

this is a witty little poem I liked the image and though this one i wont go into depth with I can't tell you how much I am enjoying this
Please I am encouraging you to complete all the books you did not yet finish
I enjoy and want to read them all. Great work dear friend. Oh and I am concidering Joining. smiles thanks for the uplifting words

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2006

on my to do list for next year... to finish my journey through imagination book and my heela over head book... got a few others in my mind wanting out too LOL

Comment from easyeverett

Excellent

I will call this cute but not great. lol. Sounds a bit like a handed down familty fable that started off interesting but lost something over the many gerations of handing it down, again and again. Very creative however. easy

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2006

LOL!
it was fun writing it though lol ;-)

Comment from mmichelle97219

Average

I guess for me this one starts out OK, and then loses it's momentum. It is a cute story and all, but I think with this the rhyme is what needs to be worked on. Right after the first couple of lines it just loses me. Sorry I can't really pin point what doesn't work. I just know it just doesn't work for me.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006

hmm... any suggestions?
thanx much! :-)

Comment from Holle

Excellent

LOLOLOL...this was fun...not enough of that in the world...I gotta say though I was waiting for one of the couples to get attacked by the ants! :-)
Food for thought for next time!~LOL
Peace,
Cristi

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2006

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

LOL Hahahah, very funny one and original. I think you are having fun with this challenges !

""what do you want for dinner tonight, hon?"
the wife asks while standing up

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"goose"

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2005

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Wow what a weird poem but you have managed to use the challenge words very successfully. I will have to think up a good challenge for you. Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2005

Comment from mheflin

Excellent

this is pretty good work and I enjoyed going over it, my favoite part in this piece is:that night
the farmer and his wife
laying in front
of the burning red and orange fire
"what do you want for dinner tonight, hon?"
the wife asks while standing up

"goose"
the farmer responds

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2005

Comment from Diny

Good

Funny read, different
I don't know if I could do one of these challenges,

But I love reading them

Write on...
Diny

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2005

Comment from Daizie

Excellent

Really cute story. This would make a wonderful illustrated children's book. I only have one question: If the bear was "bare" where, oh where did the bearskin rug come from?:-).

Best regards,
Daizie

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2005

Comment from Gresenle

Good

This is cute. I think kids would like it.

This revised version is much improved. Good job!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2005