A Life of Grace
Shakespearian Sonnet20 total reviews
Comment from dmt1967
I like the line 'a gentle and caring world is what we seek' I wish we had that world now my friend very delicate poem thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
I like the line 'a gentle and caring world is what we seek' I wish we had that world now my friend very delicate poem thank you for sharing
Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Wouldn't it be nice...Thank you~Debbie
Comment from Nebukadneser
Wow! What an absolutely beautiful sonnet on the other side of brilliant. You are an incredible talented chick , who always astound me with your writing. You teach, you love, you give us wisdom. You rock, me girl.
Well done
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
Wow! What an absolutely beautiful sonnet on the other side of brilliant. You are an incredible talented chick , who always astound me with your writing. You teach, you love, you give us wisdom. You rock, me girl.
Well done
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Wow, what do I say to a review like this? Thanks a million--this one made my night~Debbie
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie, a beautifully crafted sonnet with so many wonderful elements to it and many valued messages of hope and direction which is always present in your work. I loved this Debbie,you are inspiration in essence. Kindest admiration James xx
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
Hi Debbie, a beautifully crafted sonnet with so many wonderful elements to it and many valued messages of hope and direction which is always present in your work. I loved this Debbie,you are inspiration in essence. Kindest admiration James xx
Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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I value your kind appreciation. Glad you liked this one. Thanks so very much~Debbie xx
Comment from October21
I love the idea of making the world a better place and the considerate thought behind every word in this poem. Beautiful work here!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
I love the idea of making the world a better place and the considerate thought behind every word in this poem. Beautiful work here!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Thank you so very much for your kind and thoughtful review~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a beautifully written sonnet. I enjoyed reading, the flow was perfect. I also enjoyed the rhyming scheme. the message was delightful.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
This is a beautifully written sonnet. I enjoyed reading, the flow was perfect. I also enjoyed the rhyming scheme. the message was delightful.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Thank you again!!! Debbie
Comment from 3boysrule
I really enjoyed this poem. I feel it flowed nicely and like your choice of words. My favorite line is the last one, "Enhances world and makes a better place." I think this line says so much. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
I really enjoyed this poem. I feel it flowed nicely and like your choice of words. My favorite line is the last one, "Enhances world and makes a better place." I think this line says so much. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Thank you so very much for your kind and thoughtful review~Debbie
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
This is a beautiful sonnet you have penned. It is the sort
of writing that is needed to get more people thinking, feeling and living "A Life of Grace."
It speaks to me because: I believe that the only evil in this world is what people do to other people.
I hope you will publish it widely. It deserves 6 stars.
Thanks for sharing and keep on writing. Your friend, Bob
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
This is a beautiful sonnet you have penned. It is the sort
of writing that is needed to get more people thinking, feeling and living "A Life of Grace."
It speaks to me because: I believe that the only evil in this world is what people do to other people.
I hope you will publish it widely. It deserves 6 stars.
Thanks for sharing and keep on writing. Your friend, Bob
Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Thank you again!!! Debbie
Comment from gazzagodbod
wonderful little love poem love the pretty presentation and your words show the beauty of love, reading your profile and i just released a poem about a homeless girl anyway love your poem thank you xxgazzaxx
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
wonderful little love poem love the pretty presentation and your words show the beauty of love, reading your profile and i just released a poem about a homeless girl anyway love your poem thank you xxgazzaxx
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
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I'll check it out. Thank you so very much for your kind and thoughtful review~Debbie
Comment from beccabootie123
great choice of everything in this poem. great writing good thoughts, smooth
perfect font utilized and colors to this poem great picyutr. thank you for both writing and sharing it with us
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
great choice of everything in this poem. great writing good thoughts, smooth
perfect font utilized and colors to this poem great picyutr. thank you for both writing and sharing it with us
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
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Thank you so very much for your kind and thoughtful review~Debbie
Comment from Joannforsberg
Amen on your words here. Photo is beautiful. Wording is stunning. How did you find a font that is script writing? I so sometimes want to use one, yet do not see one offered. As I grow older I am continually working on being more gentle, more compassionate, more humble. And, I have always tried to be already in my life. Yes, grace should be our foundation, grace should sustain us, and grace should continue to lead us. Beautifully done. Blessings, JO
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
Amen on your words here. Photo is beautiful. Wording is stunning. How did you find a font that is script writing? I so sometimes want to use one, yet do not see one offered. As I grow older I am continually working on being more gentle, more compassionate, more humble. And, I have always tried to be already in my life. Yes, grace should be our foundation, grace should sustain us, and grace should continue to lead us. Beautifully done. Blessings, JO
Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Thank you again~Debie