Mike And The Tree
An inchworm decides to leave his home to explore the World85 total reviews
Comment from Angels27
A beautiful simple writeup which has loads of philosophical thoughts embedded in it. This poem makes one stop and think. Loved the picture. Compliments the writeup.
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A beautiful simple writeup which has loads of philosophical thoughts embedded in it. This poem makes one stop and think. Loved the picture. Compliments the writeup.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from Gloria ....
Very cute Goosey. That's some adventuresome inchworm you got going on over dere. Taking a vacation is always great slong as you get to return home to the brown and ugly after it's all said and done.
Gloria
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Very cute Goosey. That's some adventuresome inchworm you got going on over dere. Taking a vacation is always great slong as you get to return home to the brown and ugly after it's all said and done.
Gloria
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from Diamondlight11
Very nice children's poem as well as short, short story. The rhythm and rhyming is excellent and the art is cute. I only was slightly annoyed by the spacing of the sentences, other than that, excellent.
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Very nice children's poem as well as short, short story. The rhythm and rhyming is excellent and the art is cute. I only was slightly annoyed by the spacing of the sentences, other than that, excellent.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from Kingsland
Tennessee, misery, your rhyming was very good in this poem written for the child in mind. I liked this story telling poem. It was well written and flowed very smoothly in its thoughts and phrases. This was an excellent piece of poetic art for any child to read and enjoy... John
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Tennessee, misery, your rhyming was very good in this poem written for the child in mind. I liked this story telling poem. It was well written and flowed very smoothly in its thoughts and phrases. This was an excellent piece of poetic art for any child to read and enjoy... John
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from GWHARGIS
So, Dorothy was right. There's no place like home. I liked that he did get out of the tree and saw that the grass isn't always greener and everyone you meet generally feels the same way you do. Some lessons are the kind that have to be lived and experienced as opposed to taught. Nice job.
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So, Dorothy was right. There's no place like home. I liked that he did get out of the tree and saw that the grass isn't always greener and everyone you meet generally feels the same way you do. Some lessons are the kind that have to be lived and experienced as opposed to taught. Nice job.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from Matthew M.
I liked this tale of the inch worm that travellled around America to find out that the best place to be was at home. I enjoyed the idea of a worm on a bike. That was funny.
I saw one edit for you to fix:
Mike said,"yes, I'm getting tired
there's a spacing error between said and yes. Also the word yes needs to be Yes.
Overall, a fun little tale.
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I liked this tale of the inch worm that travellled around America to find out that the best place to be was at home. I enjoyed the idea of a worm on a bike. That was funny.
I saw one edit for you to fix:
Mike said,"yes, I'm getting tired
there's a spacing error between said and yes. Also the word yes needs to be Yes.
Overall, a fun little tale.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
There you have it, there is no place like home, not even for an inchworm! Lovely story, with a good moral in it. I like that! A fun and pleasurable read! xsx Sandra
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There you have it, there is no place like home, not even for an inchworm! Lovely story, with a good moral in it. I like that! A fun and pleasurable read! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from RaymondJohn
Very cute story. Of course MIke will soon grow wings and fly anywhere he wants. I like the interaction and the places mentioned. Fun read. Ray.
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Very cute story. Of course MIke will soon grow wings and fly anywhere he wants. I like the interaction and the places mentioned. Fun read. Ray.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from Norbanus
It seems that this story of Mike
Is one that I really could like
He traveled for miles
wound up with some smiles
After inching for quite a long hike
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It seems that this story of Mike
Is one that I really could like
He traveled for miles
wound up with some smiles
After inching for quite a long hike
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from KatieKennedy
I really love your work Eric it's so refreshing always puts a smile on my face. What's more it always rhymes perfectly and is a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. Katie
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I really love your work Eric it's so refreshing always puts a smile on my face. What's more it always rhymes perfectly and is a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. Katie
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
