Mike And The Tree
An inchworm decides to leave his home to explore the World85 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I love the simpl artwork
It will make children smils
And I love the flow of your prose/poem
you had my attention as well as every child who reads this cute write.
thank you for sharing.
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I love the simpl artwork
It will make children smils
And I love the flow of your prose/poem
you had my attention as well as every child who reads this cute write.
thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
Comment from Sandisan
A long but interesting poem. I like the way you rhymed the lines. It flowed very well and had a good meaning at the end.."there's no place like home"....
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A long but interesting poem. I like the way you rhymed the lines. It flowed very well and had a good meaning at the end.."there's no place like home"....
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
Comment from Cool Beans
This is a great poem with a great message. I love the play on words with Missouri and misery. It definitely deserves the recognition that it has received!!
Can't wait to read more. ~CB
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This is a great poem with a great message. I love the play on words with Missouri and misery. It definitely deserves the recognition that it has received!!
Can't wait to read more. ~CB
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
Comment from EMB
He really meant to say that he wanted to "wiggle or inch along the rest of the world," not "walk." LOL Now a worm on a bike is worth the price of admission. This was definitely an interesting poem, but I'm also thinking it would make a pretty decent children's book.
Very nice.
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He really meant to say that he wanted to "wiggle or inch along the rest of the world," not "walk." LOL Now a worm on a bike is worth the price of admission. This was definitely an interesting poem, but I'm also thinking it would make a pretty decent children's book.
Very nice.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
Comment from DBastian
Very cute and happy poem! You spaced it beautifully for reading - emphasizing each line as the reader progresses through the poem. And, it was a lovely story, in the process!
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Very cute and happy poem! You spaced it beautifully for reading - emphasizing each line as the reader progresses through the poem. And, it was a lovely story, in the process!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from prayingpoet
Fun, an awesome story for small children, at least the worm got out to see the world. Not sure some of those states mentioned will appreciate being called miserable! Glad the worm made it home!
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Fun, an awesome story for small children, at least the worm got out to see the world. Not sure some of those states mentioned will appreciate being called miserable! Glad the worm made it home!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from Creative77
This is such an adorable poem. It's perfect for young children. The picture you chose to accompany the poem is a perfect match. Great job!
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This is such an adorable poem. It's perfect for young children. The picture you chose to accompany the poem is a perfect match. Great job!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2013
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Thanks much
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This felt like a child's story because it was so descriptive and well written. Ever thought of writing children's stories? If not it's all good cuz this was great. :)
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This felt like a child's story because it was so descriptive and well written. Ever thought of writing children's stories? If not it's all good cuz this was great. :)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2013
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I thought that's what I was doing. Lol...
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Eric
This is a magnificent poem, Eric. That little inchworm had quite the big adventure. However it's nice to come home too and be with your good friends and families
Bear
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Hey there Eric
This is a magnificent poem, Eric. That little inchworm had quite the big adventure. However it's nice to come home too and be with your good friends and families
Bear
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
Comment from Pili Pubul
I wish I had six stars, this poem deserve them. It is no place like home it seems. I love the story - poem imagery and word choice. Very entertaining,
my grandchildren love it. Thank you for sharing.
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I wish I had six stars, this poem deserve them. It is no place like home it seems. I love the story - poem imagery and word choice. Very entertaining,
my grandchildren love it. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2013
