If Fall Should Ever Disappear
rhyming quatrains174 total reviews
Comment from elliejean
I love the poem. I think we would have to make up an autumn if it disappeared. The colors are just too great to live without. Plus autumn gently leads us into the cold winter season. Great work.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2012
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I love the poem. I think we would have to make up an autumn if it disappeared. The colors are just too great to live without. Plus autumn gently leads us into the cold winter season. Great work.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2012
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elliejean, thank you so much for your gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Brooke:)
This poem about the multi-splendored colors of autumn brings out memories of what I miss each year by living in Houston. Marilyn and I often joke about Houston', our one day of spring and fall each year, If we want to enjoy those special seasons while we live her, we have to use our imagination.
Thanks for the memory. Your words are beautiful as always.
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2012
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Hi Brooke:)
This poem about the multi-splendored colors of autumn brings out memories of what I miss each year by living in Houston. Marilyn and I often joke about Houston', our one day of spring and fall each year, If we want to enjoy those special seasons while we live her, we have to use our imagination.
Thanks for the memory. Your words are beautiful as always.
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 18-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2012
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Roger, thank you so very much for your gracious response to my poem - I truly appreciate your stopping by :-) Brooke
Comment from Annarhi
This poem has fantastic imagery that portrays Autumn wonderfully. The links to other subjects relevant to this orange season really made the poem's narrative interesting. Every stanza was amazing and easy to read; the only lines I found a little difficult to understand was the link between "if I should ever learn life's changed", "and brilliant fall has never been." Overall I greatly enjoyed it so thank you for a wonderful read!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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This poem has fantastic imagery that portrays Autumn wonderfully. The links to other subjects relevant to this orange season really made the poem's narrative interesting. Every stanza was amazing and easy to read; the only lines I found a little difficult to understand was the link between "if I should ever learn life's changed", "and brilliant fall has never been." Overall I greatly enjoyed it so thank you for a wonderful read!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Annarhi, thank you so very much for your gracious comments and encouraging review :-) Brooke
Comment from oozer
Your poem, makes me shudder to think that such
could come to pass and the Glories of Fall vanish forever.
It is such a sobering thought- but cheer up! Brooke- it
may not happen in our time! Wonderful poem!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Your poem, makes me shudder to think that such
could come to pass and the Glories of Fall vanish forever.
It is such a sobering thought- but cheer up! Brooke- it
may not happen in our time! Wonderful poem!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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oozer, thank you so much for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from fictionwriter
In my perfect world we'd have spring, then fall, then back to spring. I can see that you love the fall, and I loved this poem. You're so talented. Well done
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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In my perfect world we'd have spring, then fall, then back to spring. I can see that you love the fall, and I loved this poem. You're so talented. Well done
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Joy, I'm with you. I'm over the extremes of summer and winter :-) Thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jendowoz
Love that time of year. It's going into summer over here of course but your poem paints a lovely picture of autumn, just as I imagine it to be.
regards, Jen
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Love that time of year. It's going into summer over here of course but your poem paints a lovely picture of autumn, just as I imagine it to be.
regards, Jen
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Jen, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from MENNIPLOSS
BEAUTIFUL THIS POEM, congratulations! The verses are very pleasing and it is a marvellous writing, a lot of congratulations and graces for sharing!
Menniploss
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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BEAUTIFUL THIS POEM, congratulations! The verses are very pleasing and it is a marvellous writing, a lot of congratulations and graces for sharing!
Menniploss
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2012
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Menniploss, thank you so very much for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from Dutchie
You painted a wonderful picture in words here, Brooke.
We are blessed to have the change of seasons and Autumn is the most colorful of all. Wonderful flow and rhyme, such a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards Fia
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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You painted a wonderful picture in words here, Brooke.
We are blessed to have the change of seasons and Autumn is the most colorful of all. Wonderful flow and rhyme, such a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards Fia
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Fia, thank you so very much for your gracious review - I truly appreciate it :-) Brooke
Comment from bossmyers
Very nice piece. I love all the imagery (flocks of geese flying cross an October sky) and comparison/simile ( pumpkin was like a harvest moon). Good rhythm and rhyme, it flows well. The colors you used were very vivid and easily entwined in our mind and associated with fall. Liked it very much!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Very nice piece. I love all the imagery (flocks of geese flying cross an October sky) and comparison/simile ( pumpkin was like a harvest moon). Good rhythm and rhyme, it flows well. The colors you used were very vivid and easily entwined in our mind and associated with fall. Liked it very much!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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bossmyers, thank you so very much for your encouraging review :-) Brooke
Comment from steevie
Autumn seems so drastically far away from me now. I think in turns of winter for quite a while now. Perhaps you live where autumn is lengthy and keeps its burnished colored leaves longer than most.
Well done, Brooke.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Autumn seems so drastically far away from me now. I think in turns of winter for quite a while now. Perhaps you live where autumn is lengthy and keeps its burnished colored leaves longer than most.
Well done, Brooke.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Steve, thank you so very much for your gracious review :-) Brooke
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you're very welcome, brooke. sorry for the late reply
steve
