Forever Pregnant
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Comment from honeytree
I love the art work so much here.
My grandmother had 16 children.
Two are living the rest have died.
What a challenge it would be to be a parent
To so many, the eldest children would help.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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I love the art work so much here.
My grandmother had 16 children.
Two are living the rest have died.
What a challenge it would be to be a parent
To so many, the eldest children would help.
Honey tree
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you honeytree for your fine review of my work. Wow! 16 children. I thought 5 was a lot. :o)
Comment from mumsyone
Ha! A funny poem and a good entry for this contest, and the picture is hilarious. Good luck in the contest!
New Years (Year's) Resolutions
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Ha! A funny poem and a good entry for this contest, and the picture is hilarious. Good luck in the contest!
New Years (Year's) Resolutions
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you mumsyone for reviewing my silly poem. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from cupa tea
I love it!!!! The picture is prefect with the poem. And I have to agree I don't wanna look preg anymore either....great job!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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I love it!!!! The picture is prefect with the poem. And I have to agree I don't wanna look preg anymore either....great job!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Okay cupa tea...lets make a pact...this will be the year!! :o) Thank you so much for your review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from Joy Graham
I feel your pain! My oldest daughter is 5 foot tall jusst like you. She has never had children and people ask her all the time if she is pregnant. Poor thing! You definitely captured feeling in this poem. Best wishes to you in this contest :)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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I feel your pain! My oldest daughter is 5 foot tall jusst like you. She has never had children and people ask her all the time if she is pregnant. Poor thing! You definitely captured feeling in this poem. Best wishes to you in this contest :)
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you Joy for reviewing my silly but serious poem. I feel for your daughter. I am a diabetic and have had this problem for a very long time. It seems no matter how much weight I lose I still have the large middle.
Comment from Titanx9
This is a fun read and anyone who has carried more than twenty pounds around for a while understands this poem. The rhyming and cadence is spot on, but the imagery is a-one. This is nicely done. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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This is a fun read and anyone who has carried more than twenty pounds around for a while understands this poem. The rhyming and cadence is spot on, but the imagery is a-one. This is nicely done. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you Titanx9 for your review of my silly but serious poem. I am glad you liked it. Thank you for the contest best wishes, too.
Comment from rjuselius
it's nice to have a goal to lose weight because if you lack one, you won't succeed. i recommend weight watchers:)
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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it's nice to have a goal to lose weight because if you lack one, you won't succeed. i recommend weight watchers:)
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you rebekka for reviewing my poem and the Weight Watchers referral. I'm afraid they may not let me join. I think I might have joined and dropped out about a thousand times. :o) Sad but true. This year will be the year for me.
Comment from Father Flaps
You're only two years older than me, Mystery Poet. I started running in 2006 when I was 55. I started jogging to get in shape for my retirement. I retired on June 30th, 2010, took July & August off, and then took a part-time job at a pet store. I'm still running... why not? I'm really only semi-retired. I work about 18 hours/week.
You know, in 2006 I weighed about 183 pounds. Now, after 1,748 miles, I'm down to about 165 pounds. My hips used to bother me... not any more. I ran 272 miles this year. You can do it too.
Love that picture, you're going to kill those scales!
New Years resolutions don't last with me either... two or three days, that's all.
I love your conclusion...
"I don't want to look pregnant anymore!"
Nicely penned! Good Luck in the contest!
cheers
Kimbob
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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You're only two years older than me, Mystery Poet. I started running in 2006 when I was 55. I started jogging to get in shape for my retirement. I retired on June 30th, 2010, took July & August off, and then took a part-time job at a pet store. I'm still running... why not? I'm really only semi-retired. I work about 18 hours/week.
You know, in 2006 I weighed about 183 pounds. Now, after 1,748 miles, I'm down to about 165 pounds. My hips used to bother me... not any more. I ran 272 miles this year. You can do it too.
Love that picture, you're going to kill those scales!
New Years resolutions don't last with me either... two or three days, that's all.
I love your conclusion...
"I don't want to look pregnant anymore!"
Nicely penned! Good Luck in the contest!
cheers
Kimbob
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you Kimbob for your comments and review. Jogging is a fantastic way to get in shape. I have really bad knees so I use a recumbent bike and walk. Some days I have to use a cane to get around.
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Oh, this is just wonderful!
Love the words, and the artwork.
Love your rhymes.
Wonderful title for it.
I love your first stanza and your last stanza the best.
I had to give you a 6 star!
You made me laugh.
Good luck in the contest.
Katie
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Oh, this is just wonderful!
Love the words, and the artwork.
Love your rhymes.
Wonderful title for it.
I love your first stanza and your last stanza the best.
I had to give you a 6 star!
You made me laugh.
Good luck in the contest.
Katie
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you Katie for your great review of my poem and the six stars. You gave me a smile. I am glad you liked my poem.
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You're welcome. I'm glad I gave you a smile.
Katie
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Wow..Excellent poem on feelings here. I could feel the voice of feelings behind this one. No grammar mistakes that I could note. Good luck in the contest. Very funny poem. Cheers.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Wow..Excellent poem on feelings here. I could feel the voice of feelings behind this one. No grammar mistakes that I could note. Good luck in the contest. Very funny poem. Cheers.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you Benjamin for reviewing my poem. Wow!no grammer mistakes...that's definitely a kudos for me...I think I was absent the day grammer was taught. :o) I'm always struggling with it. I really appreciate your review...and am glad you liked the poem.
Comment from prayingpoet
Ha Ha. I bet every woman who reads this poem will be laughing in agreement. Great content, good flow and a whole lot of fun! Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Ha Ha. I bet every woman who reads this poem will be laughing in agreement. Great content, good flow and a whole lot of fun! Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you Janice for the six stars and your very nice review of my poem. I am so glad you liked it.
