Comment from random musings

Excellent

WOW, you've such a way with words my friend. Saying so much in so few words leaving your readers to ponder and imagine. Nicely done.

Hope all is well and love's in bloom in NM. Have the happiest of birthday celebrations.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012

Yes indeed. Thanks my friend!
Birthday was pleasant. :-)

Comment from Tonulak

Exceptional

Dear Jewel,
Wow! This was simply amazing! I think this the best poem by you that I've ever read. I see a bit more economy and profound, very human thinking. I'll have to keep this one:) Fondly--Ted

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012

Thanks so much, Ted!

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Penned in pureness. I think the words fit well with the artwork -- a delicate feather quill dipped on a blank page of crystal snow.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012

Thank you for stopping by, Jean.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your free-verse love poem. I enjoyed your vivid imagery and "tune/song" and "garland" metaphors. Your closing line is quite evocative. -Joan

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012

thanks Joan

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Wow, your words float down the screen
like a gentle stream, touching the heart
and soul of every romantic who brushes
their hands in the artistic and graceful
presentation.
Well done

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012

Thanks fast d!

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

My favourite line: a garland for my senses

I love the lingering taste that your words left in my senses.

Very evocative.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012

amen! Thanks!

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

How beautiful is this write. One that kisses the heart and soul of every poet here. I love your new pic girl and think you are beautiful. Love this verse especially:

I've heard your sensual tune
in carefully composed lines
Between the words of eloquence
a rose has come to bloom
I've experienced you
in fragrant eminence
A garland for my senses
Your song has kissed my soul

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012

Thank you dear. Twice...thrice...

reply by Gungalo on 05-Dec-2012

Smile tens times over. LOL.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Jewel, a lovely romantic flow of image, emotion and the deeper knowing of the moments shared. I liked this one, it had me pondering, reflecting and wanting...

Great job, very well done and a joy to read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012

Lovely review, Maureen.

Comment from mshirachot

Excellent

This has the romantic allure of the Song of Songs! Do I detect that reading "between the lines" of this is a message about the lover of our souls?

Quite lovely, Jewell! Blessings!
Marsha

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012

Thanks for stoppin in, Marsha!

Comment from Lobengula

Exceptional

I like this very much. Your wording is beautiful."...in flowing midnight dreams/and reminiscent days." Those two lines in particular grabbed me. Your rhyming is off-beat, but most interesting. No, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Best wishes, Lobengula

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012

rhyming or one ounce of meter, unintentional

Thanks for the very lovely review and pretty sixth star. I shall put it on the top of my virtual Christmas tree!~

reply by Lobengula on 05-Dec-2012

Unintentional or not, it added to the beauty of the poem. That reminds me. I must go out an buy a virtual Christmas tree myself!!!
Every good wish, Mike