Sad Santa
Why is Santa Sad?91 total reviews
Comment from Silverlock
Hi Sandra,
love this charming little verse about the true meaning of Christmas. I like the way you've let the children tell the story rather than the angel, so when children read the poem they don't feel like they are being preached to.
Lovely rhythm as always, and sounds even better when read out loud!
Regards, Barb
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Hi Sandra,
love this charming little verse about the true meaning of Christmas. I like the way you've let the children tell the story rather than the angel, so when children read the poem they don't feel like they are being preached to.
Lovely rhythm as always, and sounds even better when read out loud!
Regards, Barb
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you, Barb, I thought this one had better be done with 'human children' instead of my Hedgerow friends, it might not have been 'believable' to children otherwise, and children are very sharp on things like that!! I am so pleased you liked it, and thank you so very much for the 6 stars, that is so kind of you, thank you! xsx Sandra
Comment from Capricorn30
Nice alliteration in "Sad Santa";
I've read many wonderful fairy poems recently, and your writing is no exception;
I like the Christmas story told through the eyes of children, and the fairies mystical presence is an extra pleasure to read about
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Nice alliteration in "Sad Santa";
I've read many wonderful fairy poems recently, and your writing is no exception;
I like the Christmas story told through the eyes of children, and the fairies mystical presence is an extra pleasure to read about
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much, Capricorn, for this lovely review! I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you. xsx Sandra
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You're welcome:)
Comment from twinklepoems
I like how you managed to fit in Jesus, Santa and fairies. I think children should be able to have Santa but that Jesus is the "reason for the season". So, it was a nice approach to have them work in cooperation. I liked your aa,bb rhyming pattern, it worked throughout the poem. I think this is a great childrens poem (and adults could stand to hear it too!)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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I like how you managed to fit in Jesus, Santa and fairies. I think children should be able to have Santa but that Jesus is the "reason for the season". So, it was a nice approach to have them work in cooperation. I liked your aa,bb rhyming pattern, it worked throughout the poem. I think this is a great childrens poem (and adults could stand to hear it too!)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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My thoughts precicely. Christmas has been taken over by presents and cards and the real meaning is being lost. I am so pleased you enjoyed it, and thank you for your lovely review. xsx Sandra
Comment from amada
Oh, what a great lesson! Of course, it's all about Jesus' birthday. A wonderful reminder of "It's the reason for the season." Thank you!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Oh, what a great lesson! Of course, it's all about Jesus' birthday. A wonderful reminder of "It's the reason for the season." Thank you!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you so very muchm amada for this wonderful review, I am really pleased you enjoyed it!! Thank you! xsx Sandra.
Comment from Janet Foor
I loved this poem. When I read the title, I couldn't imagine a "Sad Santa" poem turning out right. But of course you did it. The last 2 stanzas said it all. Lovely artwork, perfect rhyme. Great message. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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I loved this poem. When I read the title, I couldn't imagine a "Sad Santa" poem turning out right. But of course you did it. The last 2 stanzas said it all. Lovely artwork, perfect rhyme. Great message. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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aww, thank you! What a lovely review! I am so pleased you weren't upset having to think of Santa being sad! Thank you so much, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. xsx Sandra
Comment from Curly Girly
This is an excellent poem and I liked the story it had to tell. Naturally your rhyming is perfect as always. BRILLIANT! I would change the title to something which sounds more positive though...?
CG
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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This is an excellent poem and I liked the story it had to tell. Naturally your rhyming is perfect as always. BRILLIANT! I would change the title to something which sounds more positive though...?
CG
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much, CG, for your great review. The titles of everything I write, always come to me first, then I can work to it. Sad Santa came to me when I was looking through FanArt and saw a sorry looking picture of Santa. I couldn't use the picture as it had his reindeer beside him drunk and disorderly!!
I am pleased you enjoyed it, thank you for your great review!! xsx Sandra.
Comment from Gungalo
You are so right girl. The little ones have to know and if they are read this poem they will know. Beautiful for kids to understand.
The happy little fairy smiled,
And went and kissed each joyful child.
"When I tell Santa, he'll be so glad,
And we'll be happy he's not sad!"
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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You are so right girl. The little ones have to know and if they are read this poem they will know. Beautiful for kids to understand.
The happy little fairy smiled,
And went and kissed each joyful child.
"When I tell Santa, he'll be so glad,
And we'll be happy he's not sad!"
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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aww, thank you my dear friend. I am so happy you liked my little story. Thank you for your lovely review!! xsx
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Smiling at you.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a beautiful piece of well rhymed poetry that will delight and uplift the reader, especially is they are children . Very exciting read. kudos
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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This is a beautiful piece of well rhymed poetry that will delight and uplift the reader, especially is they are children . Very exciting read. kudos
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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What a lovely review! Thank you Perp, I am so pleased you liked my little Christmas poem. xsx Sandra
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi sandramitchell
Wow, what a delightful and joyful children's story you tell within your excellently written poem. Love the idea of the fairy flying around interacting with the children - simply delightful.
Loved it.Thank you for sharing your creative mind.
Regards, Pete
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Hi sandramitchell
Wow, what a delightful and joyful children's story you tell within your excellently written poem. Love the idea of the fairy flying around interacting with the children - simply delightful.
Loved it.Thank you for sharing your creative mind.
Regards, Pete
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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And thank you!! What a lovely review and what wonderful things you have said about my poem, thank you!! I am so pleased you liked it. xsx Sandra
Comment from jmdg1954
Nicely written poem to exemplify your author notes.
The story was told in a clear, concise and educational format for children to read to one another or read to.
A pleasure to read, John
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Nicely written poem to exemplify your author notes.
The story was told in a clear, concise and educational format for children to read to one another or read to.
A pleasure to read, John
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much, John, for another lovely review! You always say the nicest things, I am pleased you liked this one too, thank you! xsx Sandra
