Where Men Shouldn't Wander
The sequel to 'Too Close for Comfort'45 total reviews
Comment from doris1022
fairy smairy. not my favorite subject. majic trickery. yeah catch those pest just rats.
no queen can hold the rat paper. straight.
get a rake fairy don't acare me.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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fairy smairy. not my favorite subject. majic trickery. yeah catch those pest just rats.
no queen can hold the rat paper. straight.
get a rake fairy don't acare me.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Ohhh, you might make them mad. LOL Thanks for the review and the stars.
Comment from EMB
Fairies that make you sick? Who would've thought? And they like mushrooms? Who would've thought that, too? Why did they even think they had what it takes to take on some fairies anyway? LOL
This was great. :)
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Fairies that make you sick? Who would've thought? And they like mushrooms? Who would've thought that, too? Why did they even think they had what it takes to take on some fairies anyway? LOL
This was great. :)
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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This was a sequel to another poem I did. Blake got off with a warning, and was dumb enough to have another go. The second time the queen wasn't so nice. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the stars.
Comment from Ira White
Quite amusing! I really enjoyed this very readable fairy poem. The rhymes are well done and add rhythm to the poem. The ending with the brother's fate of never both being human at once was quite clever and reminded me of another tale I heard....
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Quite amusing! I really enjoyed this very readable fairy poem. The rhymes are well done and add rhythm to the poem. The ending with the brother's fate of never both being human at once was quite clever and reminded me of another tale I heard....
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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I'm glad you found it amusing. Thanks for the stars and the kind words.
Comment from Gladness
This is delightful! The queen's magic was a great idea. Good rhyming, been and seen don't really rhyme(at least not the way I say them), but all the other words do. Thank you for this enjoyable flight of fancy ;) Anita
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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This is delightful! The queen's magic was a great idea. Good rhyming, been and seen don't really rhyme(at least not the way I say them), but all the other words do. Thank you for this enjoyable flight of fancy ;) Anita
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Norbanus
Delightful how you[ve turned this tune
It's long but then it ends too soon
We folks who think that we can rhyme
Will fall behind you every time
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Delightful how you[ve turned this tune
It's long but then it ends too soon
We folks who think that we can rhyme
Will fall behind you every time
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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I love your rhyming review. I know it's a little long, but I don't know what I could edit out. Glad you enjoyed it.
