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What is Happening?I screamed

From my heart

6 total reviews 
Comment from Gladness
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Hello, Jo. Thanks for sharing this very special dream with us. You are surely special to God. I believe God is calling you to come a little closer to Him. No matter where we are in our christian walk, we can draw nearer to Him. Have you ever studied the book of Acts? God may be calling you to a "Book of Acts" experience. Check out chapter 2.
God bless, Anita

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
    Thank you Anita for your kind review. Yes, I am familiar with the book of Acts. Thank you for your keen perception and suggestion. I will re-read Chapter 2.
Comment from Eleanor Buron
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Very emotional - the dream had to have such vividness for you to capture it so graphically in this writing. Inspirational to all who believe!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you Elly for reviewing my dream/essay. Yes, it was very vivid. I very seldom ever remember my dreams but this one was a doozie.
Comment from EMB
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Well, at first, I thought this was a piece dealing with Hurricane Sandy, but then you mention bright blue skies and Jesus descending. You're left behind, so now I'm thinking you've read one Tim Lahaye novel too many. :)

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Probably so...too many Tim Lahaye. :o) I very seldom ever remember my dreams. This one, however, really made an impression. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Janilou
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An interesting dream, and I believe you are correct in your feelings that you were meant to share this with others.


Notes:
In your opening lines,
"What is Happening?" I screamed.

This should read:

"What is happening?" I screamed.

Jan

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
    Thank you Jan for your kind review and support of my essay. I will make correction right now of the SPAG. :o)
Comment from Misrael
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That is a sobering thought and we all need to heed the call of the Holy Spirit and not quench the Holy Spirit. I think that sometimes God gives us dreams and visions to warn us and to give us another chance to come to him. Good read, good job and keep on writing.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
    Misrael, I, too, think God gives us dreams for various reasons. This one really gave me reason to exam my own life and relationship with my Savior. I am on solid ground with Him. This dream impacted my feeling so much for those who are not. I felt compelled to write it out. Thank you so much for your support and the six stars.
    Jo
Comment from Curtis Hatch
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This story is a reminder of what will happen to all who do not know the Lord when he comes. Thanks for the reminder. We all need to be reminded that Christ died for our sins.

Well done,
Curtis

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
    Thanks Curtis for your review and support. I am not one to publish my beliefs very often and maybe this is why the Lord has had me write this piece. God bless you.