Lake Of Dreams
Crown of Sonnets182 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline1616
Sorry, out of 6's but this deserves at least a 10! This is amazing! It touches me in such a way. This is how I felt about my loving man who just recently passed. Sometimes a love is SO strong and wonderful that you keep writing and writing hoping to be able to impart some of the beauty that your heart feels from it. That's what this feels like to me. Trying desperately to make someone understand how amazing you feel about this person. Yet, no words seem enough, and yet you keep trying because you must make them feel it. THANK YOU SO MUCH! I felt so much love and beauty in this poem.
Jackie
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Sorry, out of 6's but this deserves at least a 10! This is amazing! It touches me in such a way. This is how I felt about my loving man who just recently passed. Sometimes a love is SO strong and wonderful that you keep writing and writing hoping to be able to impart some of the beauty that your heart feels from it. That's what this feels like to me. Trying desperately to make someone understand how amazing you feel about this person. Yet, no words seem enough, and yet you keep trying because you must make them feel it. THANK YOU SO MUCH! I felt so much love and beauty in this poem.
Jackie
Comment Written 28-Jan-2016
Comment from evesayshi
I think this deserves a "Six Star" rating, which appears to be unavailable at this time - the poem's beauty surpasses a casual read - lyrical in its emotional flow - it describes love and its passion expressively in the splendor of the written word. I will read it again and again...
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I think this deserves a "Six Star" rating, which appears to be unavailable at this time - the poem's beauty surpasses a casual read - lyrical in its emotional flow - it describes love and its passion expressively in the splendor of the written word. I will read it again and again...
Comment Written 15-Feb-2015
Comment from tmor3735
Gungalo,wow. I just read your sonnet love poems,that you were so awarded for,and you sure did deserve that for this series of passion and love.I am still learning from you and your terrific writings. I do have to ask did you post this as a single poem or a chapter series?. I have a series of wrings on recovery that I want to post just not sure how.any Advise would be welcome.nice Writing to you..TOM
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Gungalo,wow. I just read your sonnet love poems,that you were so awarded for,and you sure did deserve that for this series of passion and love.I am still learning from you and your terrific writings. I do have to ask did you post this as a single poem or a chapter series?. I have a series of wrings on recovery that I want to post just not sure how.any Advise would be welcome.nice Writing to you..TOM
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
Comment from cardiodoug
Gungala--This is simply beautiful. Brought tear to my eyes. I'm not a poet but i know good peotry by the emotion it evokes.---Bravo------Doug
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013
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Gungala--This is simply beautiful. Brought tear to my eyes. I'm not a poet but i know good peotry by the emotion it evokes.---Bravo------Doug
Comment Written 08-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013
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Doug this is a surprise and so beautiful. Nathan and I are so glad that you like this and found it beautiful. Thank you so very much.
Comment from Alexander Bridge
Now I am not a poetry fan and this was on the longer side, but it flowed quite well and the imagery was beautiful and really seems to capture the love between these two lovers.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Now I am not a poetry fan and this was on the longer side, but it flowed quite well and the imagery was beautiful and really seems to capture the love between these two lovers.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much Alex. It was indeed long but hopefully enjoyable. Nathan and I thank you so very much.
Comment from Suzarb
Not sure where to begin with this one... It's all so good. Lemme see...
There lie with me for hours and hold me long
within our bed of flowers, each divine,
that I may listen to your heart's sweet song
and feel your body's softness close to mine.
AND
I shall lie here with you, my eyes closed tight
upon my breast your hands are laid so soft,
as if you fear to touch me on this night
I feel a surge of passion yet unscoffed.
The very breath of you brings me alive.
To hear the night, in whisper, say its name
excites me so I can't control my drive
to hurry you and then to lose my shame.
I see as if the darkness had no eyes,
my world is made of all your endless sighs.
These are words I would say to my beloved hubby, if he could understand them (haha... I'm always having to explain my poems to him).... just really wonderful wonderful imagery.... I am really there with him as I coast along with you on your word wave. It is truly lovely and brought tears to my eyes because your words describe exactly the way my husband and I feel about each other.... that completeness thing.
OF COURSE you won the contest. OMG!!!! Thank you for sharing. I'm gonna read it to my hubby... and explain it later. ;-) Suz.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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Not sure where to begin with this one... It's all so good. Lemme see...
There lie with me for hours and hold me long
within our bed of flowers, each divine,
that I may listen to your heart's sweet song
and feel your body's softness close to mine.
AND
I shall lie here with you, my eyes closed tight
upon my breast your hands are laid so soft,
as if you fear to touch me on this night
I feel a surge of passion yet unscoffed.
The very breath of you brings me alive.
To hear the night, in whisper, say its name
excites me so I can't control my drive
to hurry you and then to lose my shame.
I see as if the darkness had no eyes,
my world is made of all your endless sighs.
These are words I would say to my beloved hubby, if he could understand them (haha... I'm always having to explain my poems to him).... just really wonderful wonderful imagery.... I am really there with him as I coast along with you on your word wave. It is truly lovely and brought tears to my eyes because your words describe exactly the way my husband and I feel about each other.... that completeness thing.
OF COURSE you won the contest. OMG!!!! Thank you for sharing. I'm gonna read it to my hubby... and explain it later. ;-) Suz.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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Suz, thanks so much for reading and reviewing this one. Nathan and I appreciate it very much. By all means, read it to hubby.
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I'll ;let you know what he thinks, but keep in mind he doesnt know a sonnet from a bonnet!
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Don't tell him. Heheh.
Comment from MzNiki
Congratulations on winning with this one! You deserve it. All your hard work is a privileged to read and review. Than k you for all your wonderful contributions! Keep up the groovy work !(*_*)!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Congratulations on winning with this one! You deserve it. All your hard work is a privileged to read and review. Than k you for all your wonderful contributions! Keep up the groovy work !(*_*)!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Nathan and I thank you so very much Niki for this review. Sigh.
Comment from Sueellen11
Gungalo firstly, congratulation on a most deserving win for poem/poet of the month, well done, now that's the great writing I know, wonderful imagery, that picture is so beautiful, excellent continuation into each sonnets, very smooth rhythmic flow, great writing as always, blessings and hugs sue
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Gungalo firstly, congratulation on a most deserving win for poem/poet of the month, well done, now that's the great writing I know, wonderful imagery, that picture is so beautiful, excellent continuation into each sonnets, very smooth rhythmic flow, great writing as always, blessings and hugs sue
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Oh thank you so much Sue for a beautiful review. Nathan and I enjoyed doing this one.
Comment from DanielEkine
"Where none can come without our loving grace
beside clear waters on the mountain's crest
I watch you dance in garlands and in lace
and trace my hands about your silken breast."
A romance novel in a poem form. Now I know why it's the poem of the month. it's unfathomably remarkable. romance is a raunchy knight. Thank you so much with such quality of creativity.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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"Where none can come without our loving grace
beside clear waters on the mountain's crest
I watch you dance in garlands and in lace
and trace my hands about your silken breast."
A romance novel in a poem form. Now I know why it's the poem of the month. it's unfathomably remarkable. romance is a raunchy knight. Thank you so much with such quality of creativity.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Thank for reading this Daniel and leaving a great review. It's a wonderful review.
Comment from Garry Souders
You must publish this, people need to read it, to devour it to taste it on their lips, to feel it in their hearts, its meant to be read by lovers on a beautiful day of storms and sun and birds and violins playing in the celestial sky, I can not say enough, you are a poem.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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You must publish this, people need to read it, to devour it to taste it on their lips, to feel it in their hearts, its meant to be read by lovers on a beautiful day of storms and sun and birds and violins playing in the celestial sky, I can not say enough, you are a poem.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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Sigh Garry, Nathan and I appreciate your review of this one. It's really something.
