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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "for me,"keep your hope alive....
8 total reviews
Comment from Karl_Schembri
You stuck to the rules impeccably, and you've delivered impeccably too.
Sometimes I wonder about our persona as writers as opposed to real life - sometimes there's a huge gap, sometimes there isn't. Yet writing remains 'shy and quiet', while talking to us, without the need for drama or loudness.
Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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You stuck to the rules impeccably, and you've delivered impeccably too.
Sometimes I wonder about our persona as writers as opposed to real life - sometimes there's a huge gap, sometimes there isn't. Yet writing remains 'shy and quiet', while talking to us, without the need for drama or loudness.
Well done!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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thank you karl :)
Comment from C E Jag
I find it much more easier to express myself with writing than speaking. With such few words, you put this across perfectly! Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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I find it much more easier to express myself with writing than speaking. With such few words, you put this across perfectly! Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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thank you jag :)
Comment from joann r romei
Very good for such a short poem, I believe this to be true for many. Most are telling their story under the fiction catagory, Nice one
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Very good for such a short poem, I believe this to be true for many. Most are telling their story under the fiction catagory, Nice one
Comment Written 24-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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thank you joann :)
Comment from Angels27
Very true... There is so much conveyed in just six words. An entire concept can be encompassed in a few words. All the very best in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Very true... There is so much conveyed in just six words. An entire concept can be encompassed in a few words. All the very best in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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thank you angel :)
Comment from MAMONIA
Very excellent. You get your point across
in a lovely way. Explaining who and what
you are and how you release.
Isn't it amazing how much can be said in
so few words?
This is a great entry.
Best of luck, my friend.
Marie
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Very excellent. You get your point across
in a lovely way. Explaining who and what
you are and how you release.
Isn't it amazing how much can be said in
so few words?
This is a great entry.
Best of luck, my friend.
Marie
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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thanx marie! :)
Comment from terry drake
I suppose that can be true. Writing is talking as you share your views with others. The pen can be a mighty weapon to behold and your short poem points that out.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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I suppose that can be true. Writing is talking as you share your views with others. The pen can be a mighty weapon to behold and your short poem points that out.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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thank terry :)
Comment from GWHARGIS
That's how I feel as well. I can say so much more with my writing than I can with my mouth. It's usually not shyness though that keeps us from talking. Its that we're in our own little world. Nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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That's how I feel as well. I can say so much more with my writing than I can with my mouth. It's usually not shyness though that keeps us from talking. Its that we're in our own little world. Nice job.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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lol! thank you gw :)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I think some of use our writing to express our feelings because we are a little shy well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Yes I think some of use our writing to express our feelings because we are a little shy well done regards Jill
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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thank you jill :)
