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A Mother's Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Tigger"
A book of poems inspired by my son

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Comment from daniaa
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I like it a lot but I think it was missing candy and Halloween word too, as much as u show other nice words maybe I am wrong,, it is. Really nice good luck

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2012
    "Incorporate trick or treating, costumes, candy, or some other non-horror aspect of Halloween." -- I incorporated trick or treating, costumes, and candy:

    Determined to get the
    Best pickin'
    (from the candy bowl).

    I don't believe that I need to outright say "Halloween" in it, since everything I wrote about describes it. :)

    Thank you for the review, but I will settle with we can agree to disagree. ;)
reply by daniaa on 26-Oct-2012
    Yes you are right, i just meant to show the different kind of candies just to make them imagin the candy ....lol but u r good dear
Comment from Joannforsberg
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First time out-an'-about,
Celebrating the day (or night!)
In such an innocent way,
Giggles and smiles,
And buckets o' fun.

CLAP, CLAP, CLAP...

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2012
    Thanks! :)
Comment from Lulu22
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This is so darned cute and I certainly enjoyed reading every
line. Children love 'trick or treat' I have found out over the years that there are organization and home halloween
parties where children are not subject to gory and scary
parties. Your Tiger is an interesting character and I
read about him with a smile on my lips.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2012
    Thank you!
Comment from Cindy Warren
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That's cute, about the fun part of Halloween. I love handing out candy to all the little goblins, and tiggers. The picture is adorable. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2012
    Thank you!