Dr. Fatima
A triolet15 total reviews
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
I've always loved the name Fatima, and she is so adorable. This shines with the pride and joy of a happy grandfather- great triolet! God bless, Holly
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2012
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I've always loved the name Fatima, and she is so adorable. This shines with the pride and joy of a happy grandfather- great triolet! God bless, Holly
Comment Written 20-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2012
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Holly my friend, I am delighted to read your wonderful comments, thank you very much, enjoy the weekend.
Comment from Spitfire
Charging chi from going aground--what a neat line! Also:
Twenty-four seven my heartbeat --clever and goes with the metaphorical doctor. Love the title and picture. I'll bet you spoil her--but that's what Grandpas are for.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Charging chi from going aground--what a neat line! Also:
Twenty-four seven my heartbeat --clever and goes with the metaphorical doctor. Love the title and picture. I'll bet you spoil her--but that's what Grandpas are for.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Shari my friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review, glad you like the poem.
Comment from Peter@Poole
Lovely! Just when I was about to ask why I'd seen no photos, you posted this poem with a picture of your gorgeous granddaughter, Dr. Fatima. Jinny says what a darling too.
This is a successful triolet, Kamran, and you'll make them flow even better as you write more. I often modify mine because the standard form can seem very contrived. Well done. Peter
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Lovely! Just when I was about to ask why I'd seen no photos, you posted this poem with a picture of your gorgeous granddaughter, Dr. Fatima. Jinny says what a darling too.
This is a successful triolet, Kamran, and you'll make them flow even better as you write more. I often modify mine because the standard form can seem very contrived. Well done. Peter
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you my friend, I am highly encouraged and always look forward to your wonderful reviews and guidance, enjoy the weekend.
Comment from melyuki
such a "feel good" triolet my dear friend. awesome tribute to Dr. Fatima, your gorgeous little grand daughter.. what a cutie she is... and obviously brings out the best in her grand dad that's for sure... thanks for the delight.. luv it.. have a fantastic weekend Kamran, take care and bundles of happy smiles for you and Fatima.. cheers mel xxxxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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such a "feel good" triolet my dear friend. awesome tribute to Dr. Fatima, your gorgeous little grand daughter.. what a cutie she is... and obviously brings out the best in her grand dad that's for sure... thanks for the delight.. luv it.. have a fantastic weekend Kamran, take care and bundles of happy smiles for you and Fatima.. cheers mel xxxxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Mel my friend, I am delighted you like this write, I appreciate your time and the wonderful, encouraging review, thank you very much and you too please enjoy the weekend,God bless you.
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Ameen,
What a sweet tribute to your grand-daughter:) Please accept my wishes for to live a long and worthy life. Lovely poem--Ted
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Dear Ameen,
What a sweet tribute to your grand-daughter:) Please accept my wishes for to live a long and worthy life. Lovely poem--Ted
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Ted my friend, hope all's well, haven't seen any posts from you, thank you for stopping by and please take care.
Comment from John Lofburger
a good triolet in the form
very musical
charming story about a child bringing hope and merriness.
with a beautiful and revered name too
Blessed be this family
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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a good triolet in the form
very musical
charming story about a child bringing hope and merriness.
with a beautiful and revered name too
Blessed be this family
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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John my friend, I am pleased you like the write, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much, enjoy the weekend.
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Thanks, you're welcome. enjoy the week end too
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, ameen, you did a great job writing this triolet poem about the future doctor, she is a cutie pie, i enjoyed reading this one. love the picture
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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this is very well written, ameen, you did a great job writing this triolet poem about the future doctor, she is a cutie pie, i enjoyed reading this one. love the picture
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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I am grateful to you my friend, so pleased you like the poem, thank you very much.
Comment from sunnilicious
Awe well that photo is of a little sweetheart. And what a lovely triolet poem to commemorate her decision to become a doctor. Smart child. High hope. God bless your family always. Peace.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Awe well that photo is of a little sweetheart. And what a lovely triolet poem to commemorate her decision to become a doctor. Smart child. High hope. God bless your family always. Peace.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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sunnilicious my friend, what a lovely review, so kind of you, I appreciate the time and the wonderful comments, thank you and God bless you too.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Wonderfully delightful poem about a very pretty granddaughter! This line made me laugh--"Charging chi from going aground". Man, was that an understatement! I'm lucky to keep up with 20-yr-old souls much less have my "Chi" in gear for a preschooler. They have so much energy. At the same time, they are just too cute!!!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Wonderfully delightful poem about a very pretty granddaughter! This line made me laugh--"Charging chi from going aground". Man, was that an understatement! I'm lucky to keep up with 20-yr-old souls much less have my "Chi" in gear for a preschooler. They have so much energy. At the same time, they are just too cute!!!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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MN my friend, I love your wonderful comments, appreciate the time and the wonderful insights, thank you very much.
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You are very welcome. I really enjoyed this work of yours. MN :)
Comment from Curly Girly
A lovely poem about a joyful mother, with high ambitions for her lovely daughter. She looks happy and loved! What more could a child want?
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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A lovely poem about a joyful mother, with high ambitions for her lovely daughter. She looks happy and loved! What more could a child want?
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Hello Curly, my friend, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
