Lover's poem
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Comment from ernesto escarro
Lovers poem
All the more feeling felt express passionate love
to show.
the only reason behind this is love.
So kiss becomes sweeter and hugs becomes tighter.
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Lovers poem
All the more feeling felt express passionate love
to show.
the only reason behind this is love.
So kiss becomes sweeter and hugs becomes tighter.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
Comment from wordsareus
Your poem is good but it doesn't follow the format of a 5-7-5 poem. A 5-7-5 poem is a short poem where the first line has five syllables, the second line has seven syllables and the third line has five syllables.
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Your poem is good but it doesn't follow the format of a 5-7-5 poem. A 5-7-5 poem is a short poem where the first line has five syllables, the second line has seven syllables and the third line has five syllables.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
