Love Yourself First
A poem with a simple message about loving oneself.3 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form.
You deliver a thought-provoking message about the nature of love, self-love and relationships.
Brooke :-)
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form.
You deliver a thought-provoking message about the nature of love, self-love and relationships.
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
Comment from Chris Tee
This 5-7-5 poem is absolutely compliant to form and syllable counts.
It is a poem with wisdom and an excellent entry on the contest. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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This 5-7-5 poem is absolutely compliant to form and syllable counts.
It is a poem with wisdom and an excellent entry on the contest. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thanks a lot sir.
Comment from ernesto escarro
Love Yourself First
Love teaches care and understanding.
Anyone who cares must say love yourself first,
and in the utmost, he/she wants her lover to live
because of care.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Love Yourself First
Love teaches care and understanding.
Anyone who cares must say love yourself first,
and in the utmost, he/she wants her lover to live
because of care.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you sir.
