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Homeward Bound2 total reviews
Comment from terry drake
This is not a 5-7-5 poem and it does not qualify for the contest. If you want to know where it falls short just ask but better yet count your syllables on each line. 6-8-6/
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This is not a 5-7-5 poem and it does not qualify for the contest. If you want to know where it falls short just ask but better yet count your syllables on each line. 6-8-6/
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
Comment from sukeymackie
Janice, I guess my review is going to have more words in it than your poem but that's okay because spartan though it may be in the haiku form it still has that beautiful rich tone and pitch of a well thought out poem.
Well done, good job
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Janice, I guess my review is going to have more words in it than your poem but that's okay because spartan though it may be in the haiku form it still has that beautiful rich tone and pitch of a well thought out poem.
Well done, good job
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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thank you. your comment is such a blessing.
