Losing You
Remembering my mother45 total reviews
Comment from TammyGail
If you were rushing than I am crazier than thought - my god did you ever have me weeping already my makeup looks like crap-ola :) really you story was wow - the emotion weaved into this sent chills down my spine - I didn't look for spag sweetie sorry I suck at such things I just read or let the ink read me in this case it was both - I wish you all the best in the contest and more
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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If you were rushing than I am crazier than thought - my god did you ever have me weeping already my makeup looks like crap-ola :) really you story was wow - the emotion weaved into this sent chills down my spine - I didn't look for spag sweetie sorry I suck at such things I just read or let the ink read me in this case it was both - I wish you all the best in the contest and more
Comment Written 16-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for the exceptional rating and your very kind words. You made my day!
Jan
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this story about the night your mother died, excellent imagery presented here. i didn't spot any spags. i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this story about the night your mother died, excellent imagery presented here. i didn't spot any spags. i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and the five stars.
Jan
Comment from alexisleech
You are so, so lucky to have those beautiful memories of your mum. The way I see it, the more you were loved, the more you have lost, because being loved like that, so unconditionally, is the greatest love a parent could give. Sadly not all of us experienced the same, and the memory of a parent can conjure up visions of insecurity of sadness. You, on the other hand, have been blessed. Good luck in the contest with this beautifully written piece. Alexis x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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You are so, so lucky to have those beautiful memories of your mum. The way I see it, the more you were loved, the more you have lost, because being loved like that, so unconditionally, is the greatest love a parent could give. Sadly not all of us experienced the same, and the memory of a parent can conjure up visions of insecurity of sadness. You, on the other hand, have been blessed. Good luck in the contest with this beautifully written piece. Alexis x
Comment Written 16-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and the five stars.
Jan
Comment from c_lucas
Love goes behind the Veil to tether two individuals together. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Love goes behind the Veil to tether two individuals together. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and the five stars.
Jan
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You're welcome, Jan. Charlie
Comment from Spitfire
This is beautifully written. Your love and pain both come through with the specific details of memories in youth.
The pain exploded in my chest like shrapnel--wow!
The irony of the last phone call doubles the impact.
I'm glad that four years later your mother's spirit came through with a message you needed to hear.
A powerful last line.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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This is beautifully written. Your love and pain both come through with the specific details of memories in youth.
The pain exploded in my chest like shrapnel--wow!
The irony of the last phone call doubles the impact.
I'm glad that four years later your mother's spirit came through with a message you needed to hear.
A powerful last line.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and the five stars. Yes, it was a wonderful experience, one I would love to repeat - but so far, it hasn't happened.
Jan
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My mother came through to me from the other side several times shortly after she passed away. We agreed on a single contact word before she died. When a "rose" comes into my life, I know Mom is with me.
Comment from Lady Valor
Wow I absolutely just loved that. I believe it was very well written and was packed with emotion that I am sure a lot of people, myself included, can look at and relate to it. Great write
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Wow I absolutely just loved that. I believe it was very well written and was packed with emotion that I am sure a lot of people, myself included, can look at and relate to it. Great write
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments and the five stars.
Jan
Comment from gramalot8
Mystery Author, I so enjoyed reading your story. So sorry for your loss. It brought back memories of the loss of my dad. Hard to lose a parent that you're close to. You're words brought your memories alive. Thanks for sharing with us and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Mystery Author, I so enjoyed reading your story. So sorry for your loss. It brought back memories of the loss of my dad. Hard to lose a parent that you're close to. You're words brought your memories alive. Thanks for sharing with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and the five stars.
Jan
Comment from Vinnyfan
This is beautiful. You can feel the warmth and tenderness of your mother in your writing. Your love for your children, also, comes across here. Very well done!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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This is beautiful. You can feel the warmth and tenderness of your mother in your writing. Your love for your children, also, comes across here. Very well done!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Wow, thank you so much! I deeply appreciate the rating and your kind words.
Jan
Comment from roseellen
This story touched my heart, You speak of her with such feeling. In forty years I still remember my own mother--- as clear as yesterday sometimes.
Your word process is clear and I liked how you remembered even her perfume, and I am sorry that it hurts.
It is not strange that she paid a spiritual visit, I believe it must surely heal a little as she wanted it to. A very good piece of work even in its sadness.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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This story touched my heart, You speak of her with such feeling. In forty years I still remember my own mother--- as clear as yesterday sometimes.
Your word process is clear and I liked how you remembered even her perfume, and I am sorry that it hurts.
It is not strange that she paid a spiritual visit, I believe it must surely heal a little as she wanted it to. A very good piece of work even in its sadness.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments and the five stars. Yes, the spiritual visit was amazing to say the least!
Jan
Comment from Meta~Mark
Losing You is a very emotional and heartfelt story that I am certain the tears were flowing while writing this out, the memories and the pain still holds true..
Best of luck in this I Remember writing prompt, great job!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Losing You is a very emotional and heartfelt story that I am certain the tears were flowing while writing this out, the memories and the pain still holds true..
Best of luck in this I Remember writing prompt, great job!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much for this wonderful review. Yes, tears flow. :-)
