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Dear Lexi

Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Hanging Out with You"
"Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus

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Comment from babylonia
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jan,
that's pretty cool. your "hanging out" time. LOL i wonder how she came up with that one. made me smile and giggle and smiggle some more. i hope you have more "hanging out" time in the nearest future.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
    sorry for the late reply -- thank you for reading -- we try to hang out at least two days a week together -- love, jan
Comment from Gideon Roth
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Good Morning. I am happy to be back and have a few days to get caught up with all the new submission notifications by my favorite writers that are in my inbox. This was a very cute and well written piece of poetry. It it also one that Lexi will treasure in the years to come. Again, well done and keep up the great writing...Gideon

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
    sorry for the late reply -- thank you for reading -- love, jan
Comment from Showboat
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Hey Jan,

What a cute poem and what a lucky girl Lexi is to have such a devoted Nana. One day, you need to make these into a book for her. How darling.

Great job,

Hugs,
Gayle

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    thanks for reading - sorry this is so late - love, jan
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Those moments you share are the gems in life.
I liked this one. Reminds me how the simply things can indeed give us so much pleasure.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    thanks for reading - sorry this is so late - love, jan
Comment from EMB
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This is a wonderful piece, bringing your grandparents to readers' attention. I loved the flow, and your rhyming scheme was masterfully crafted.

Very nicely done.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
    thanks, Edward. Actually, I am the grandparent. love, jan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I believe they don't believe because in this era it rare to see children and adults having fun and communicating with each other.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
    you are probably correct, barbara -- thanks for reading -- love, jan
Comment from artemis53
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Lovely piece and picture, Jan. What a wonderful time to just 'hang out." Nothing pressing to do but truly enjoy each others company.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
    artemis53: My only grandchild, Lexi, has provided me many reasons to continue fighting the good fight. Just hanging out with her is a big part of that. thanks for reading. love, jan
Comment from Melspoems
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Hi Jan
I loved reading this poem about how much you and your granddaughter enjoy "hanging out" with each other, possibly because I so enjoyed hanging out with my gran :-)
Your love and joy are expressed beautifully.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
    My daughter and my mom had this special type relationship. I am so blessed to be able to take it another generation. love, jan
Comment from heyjude
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Jan, another sweet story for Lexi's book. She will
get so much joy out of reading all her stories
and her time with her nanny.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
    I hope so, jude -- today, we all met for lunch after church -- when my daughter pulled into the parking lot, Lexi said, "There's Nanny's car, that means she's here. I just love my Nanny." How can you not love a child like that? love, jan
reply by heyjude on 15-Oct-2012
    How old is Lexi now? Judy
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
    She will be 4 at the end of January.
reply by heyjude on 16-Oct-2012
    They grow up so fast. Judy
Comment from c_lucas
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Grandparenting gives one a second chance at parenting. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
    yes, it does, Charlie, and we are normally so much better at it the second time around -- love, jan
reply by c_lucas on 15-Oct-2012
    You're welcome, Jan. Charlie