Halloween Candy
A young girl is tired of being bullied.85 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Halloween candy indeed to much sweet, It is always a fun day for the children. I enjoyed reading the story, God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2013
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Halloween candy indeed to much sweet, It is always a fun day for the children. I enjoyed reading the story, God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2013
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Thanks! Glad you are enjoying my work.
Jan
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Your welcome, Jan. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Janilou,
It is easy to see why this story won the contest. It is delightful and I was so glad when our heroine and Abigail got the best of the bullies. This story is well composed and compelling. Congrats on the win. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Hi Janilou,
It is easy to see why this story won the contest. It is delightful and I was so glad when our heroine and Abigail got the best of the bullies. This story is well composed and compelling. Congrats on the win. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much, Chey. :-) I do appreciate your kind words and congrats!
Jan
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A great ending for a story about getting even with Halloween bullies. It's good to have friends in spooky places. Well done. :) nancy
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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A great ending for a story about getting even with Halloween bullies. It's good to have friends in spooky places. Well done. :) nancy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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I am honored by the exceptional rating. Thank you so much for this. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from lewische
Lovely! Don't we all like to see bullies get their just deerts? And wouldn't it be marvellous to turn the tables like your narrator? I liked the spin on her imaginary friend being a ghost! Best regards.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Lovely! Don't we all like to see bullies get their just deerts? And wouldn't it be marvellous to turn the tables like your narrator? I liked the spin on her imaginary friend being a ghost! Best regards.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate your comments and the rating. :-)
Jan
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Blue Beetle 2
What a fun wonderful little story! So didn't see the end coming, and loved it! You have a fantastic style, and its no wonder you've been rewarded for your work. Good job.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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What a fun wonderful little story! So didn't see the end coming, and loved it! You have a fantastic style, and its no wonder you've been rewarded for your work. Good job.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.
Jan
Comment from beadyredeyes
Very well done!
It was succinct and clear. The storyline was intriguing and went in a different direction than expected.
The little girl's character was well fleshed out, especially the scene with her mother.
Fun read.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Very well done!
It was succinct and clear. The storyline was intriguing and went in a different direction than expected.
The little girl's character was well fleshed out, especially the scene with her mother.
Fun read.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.
Jan
Comment from Writingfundimension
Wow, I can see why this deserved the first place prize. A really excellent Halloween-themed entry and written in perfect flash fiction style. Bravo on an excellent write for you and a treat for me! Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Wow, I can see why this deserved the first place prize. A really excellent Halloween-themed entry and written in perfect flash fiction style. Bravo on an excellent write for you and a treat for me! Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.
Jan
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You're very welcome, Jan. I hope to see more of your unique and refreshing humor. Take care... Bev
Comment from Littlegirl38732
Great job!Haha! Clever girl! I am glad you won the contest. You did a wonderful job. I love the girl's stutter. It sounds so legitimate! I love this story,and I look forward to seeing more from you. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Great job!Haha! Clever girl! I am glad you won the contest. You did a wonderful job. I love the girl's stutter. It sounds so legitimate! I love this story,and I look forward to seeing more from you. Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.
Jan
Comment from Alexmi1984
It was a beautiful and joyful story that you wrote and I read. It showed me the mentality of kids and the fact that they might be unaware that words hurt. As far as the writing's concerned, I don't think that there much I can say as I find that your story's a winner and that you deserve these prizes you've received for it.
Alex :)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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It was a beautiful and joyful story that you wrote and I read. It showed me the mentality of kids and the fact that they might be unaware that words hurt. As far as the writing's concerned, I don't think that there much I can say as I find that your story's a winner and that you deserve these prizes you've received for it.
Alex :)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.
Jan
Comment from Terror2s
What a wonderful story. This was fun to read and the setting was perfect for the holiday. I liked the way you integrated a bullying theme that so many children must deal with. T2
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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What a wonderful story. This was fun to read and the setting was perfect for the holiday. I liked the way you integrated a bullying theme that so many children must deal with. T2
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.
Jan
