In The Mouths Of Babes End.
A mother protects her son's.15 total reviews
Comment from saychirah
This is lovely. I enjoyed your flow with words,the way you talk about your boys with so much love. Despite what they may have thought,they now know that you really love them. You are a good writer. Expecting more!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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This is lovely. I enjoyed your flow with words,the way you talk about your boys with so much love. Despite what they may have thought,they now know that you really love them. You are a good writer. Expecting more!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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thank you so much for this positive review.
Comment from rushingwater
I really enjoy how you just write about the everyday life of things and how they progress along. It is of great value to those who are raising children now. I like your approach with the boys and that fact that must have thought you to be challenged. That is where fun memories are made and good on you for being an open mother. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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I really enjoy how you just write about the everyday life of things and how they progress along. It is of great value to those who are raising children now. I like your approach with the boys and that fact that must have thought you to be challenged. That is where fun memories are made and good on you for being an open mother. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Thank you for this amazing review.
Comment from Chris Tee
Wow! Mom you were really trying your best mom. You were a bit weird mom, but it is part of parenting mom. Well done with this excellent account of your boys growing up.
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Wow! Mom you were really trying your best mom. You were a bit weird mom, but it is part of parenting mom. Well done with this excellent account of your boys growing up.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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I know, I've mellowed with the little guy.
Comment from Angels27
Awesome writing Joann. Ha ha...you have me in splits recalling your lovely jingles. I am positive your children did not know to handle their mom. The article is really cool. Loved reading it.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Awesome writing Joann. Ha ha...you have me in splits recalling your lovely jingles. I am positive your children did not know to handle their mom. The article is really cool. Loved reading it.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Thank you
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, this is excellent - I wish I hadn't missed the first parts - now I'll have to back up to read them. Narrative voice - excellent, pacing - excellent, descriptive - vivid, imagery and imagination in a nonfiction piece - outstanding.
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Wow, this is excellent - I wish I hadn't missed the first parts - now I'll have to back up to read them. Narrative voice - excellent, pacing - excellent, descriptive - vivid, imagery and imagination in a nonfiction piece - outstanding.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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See and you thought your poem was a shocker, Now you can refer reviewers to my piece lol Thanks for the stars.
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You are welcome!
