In The Mouths Of Babes End.
A mother protects her son's.15 total reviews
Comment from GeraldS
Finally ... the end.
I'm relieved that your neighbor's concern probably had no basis, although I've seen some newspaper accounts of things like that actually happening.
What a twist at the end! I never would have suspected the outcome of the last line. I guess the moral of the story is that Moms worry too much.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Finally ... the end.
I'm relieved that your neighbor's concern probably had no basis, although I've seen some newspaper accounts of things like that actually happening.
What a twist at the end! I never would have suspected the outcome of the last line. I guess the moral of the story is that Moms worry too much.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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yes we do, and I hope you enjoyed it, thanks for the review.
Comment from jules_austen
very, very sweet. it acentuates the sentiments in a person. though it is not classified much as a story, the entire plot portrays motherly love. mothers as well as children can relate to it easily. very heart touching.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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very, very sweet. it acentuates the sentiments in a person. though it is not classified much as a story, the entire plot portrays motherly love. mothers as well as children can relate to it easily. very heart touching.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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There are two part before this, if you go to my portfolio you can check it out. Thanks for the positive review.
Comment from Tina McKala
If your gay -- you`re.
I must say I did not really understood the issue with buses. And also the last paragraph did not fit that well...if it is just my strange feeling caused by misunderstanding, than I am sorry.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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If your gay -- you`re.
I must say I did not really understood the issue with buses. And also the last paragraph did not fit that well...if it is just my strange feeling caused by misunderstanding, than I am sorry.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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There are two part prior to the ending, if you want to get a better understanding of the story feel free to check it out, I thank you for the review.
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O.K. thank you for letting me know! I will :)
Comment from dmt1967
I like this story very well told I have one daughter I know what mothers go through and I think every mother reading this will relate thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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I like this story very well told I have one daughter I know what mothers go through and I think every mother reading this will relate thank you for sharing
Comment Written 13-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much, everything is such a concern when a mom is a worry wart.
Comment from Misrael
Well I think you probibly did a good job even if you might not think so. All of us do things that our children think is weird and they say they will never do that sort of thing. But I say time will tell what happens. Good read, good job and keep on writing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Well I think you probibly did a good job even if you might not think so. All of us do things that our children think is weird and they say they will never do that sort of thing. But I say time will tell what happens. Good read, good job and keep on writing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Thanks I'm so glad you enjoyed it, every word was true. It is difficult raising boys. My husband worked 10 hr days and wasn't around for homework and the daily routine. Sometimes I want to go back ,just for a day.
Comment from EMB
Well, this was definitely an engaging read, especially if you're a parent of little ones. I remember having to address such things with my children. Fortunately, there are so many children's books that cover such subjects, including molestation, sex, diseases, etc. It was a relief for me and my wife not to have to come up with all of the appropriate ways to approach the subjects on our own.
I really enjoyed this piece.
Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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Well, this was definitely an engaging read, especially if you're a parent of little ones. I remember having to address such things with my children. Fortunately, there are so many children's books that cover such subjects, including molestation, sex, diseases, etc. It was a relief for me and my wife not to have to come up with all of the appropriate ways to approach the subjects on our own.
I really enjoyed this piece.
Well done.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from johnabrennan1
This was worth waiting for. A good well rounded story with a caution for all concerned. Keep writing you were getting quite profficent..............
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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This was worth waiting for. A good well rounded story with a caution for all concerned. Keep writing you were getting quite profficent..............
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Thanks for the six, couldn't make it the other night, Did you read, I'm sure they loved it.
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Sadly they will have to wait to hear my dulcet tones until next time..............We missed you terribly........terribly, I say...........
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hahhahah Did anyone cry?
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Only me...............sob....sob
Comment from donaldww
Great final story! Well written and fun too. Do you still make cupcakes?
If your gay, don't be afraid to say <<- you're
Excellent!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Great final story! Well written and fun too. Do you still make cupcakes?
If your gay, don't be afraid to say <<- you're
Excellent!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Yes I still do, and ice cream sundays with the cherry on top
Comment from TammyGail
Oh my sister I have to laugh at this story - you had me and indeed kept me throughout - one of your best indeed - thanks for sharing always a pleasure to bask your ink -
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Oh my sister I have to laugh at this story - you had me and indeed kept me throughout - one of your best indeed - thanks for sharing always a pleasure to bask your ink -
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Glad to have made you smile. Bless you
Comment from Spitfire
Delightful descriptions of the children's reactions as you try to be subtle, than blatant with the horrfying picture.
Love the clever songs to get across the message of gay and againg the boys' reaction.
No questions asked until morning ... But whatever you do, don't take the bus.--brilliant. Brings us back to the issue.
Love the ending. Darn, I still can't give you a six!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Delightful descriptions of the children's reactions as you try to be subtle, than blatant with the horrfying picture.
Love the clever songs to get across the message of gay and againg the boys' reaction.
No questions asked until morning ... But whatever you do, don't take the bus.--brilliant. Brings us back to the issue.
Love the ending. Darn, I still can't give you a six!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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That's quite alright, The review was a 12! How's Frank? Be good to him or I'm moving in and hearing all his stories, My husband's stories are boring to me now. LOL
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Frank's doing fine. I told him one of my readers was falling for him. He said, "Get her phone number." :-)
Get you hubby to write his stories and then rewrite them for FS. They may not be boring to others.
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Right now I am so wrapped up in myself, but he has fanstastic stories as well, An editor told me once.. Every life is worth a story, How true she was.....
