Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

raining poetry through your pain making everybody not pretend seeing the words that are Inked within your mind making people realize you're one of a kind this was so divinely written Perfect Imaging theme is descriptive measures aligned perfectly have a blessed day and thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018

Thanks So much Ricky for you generous review and stars! I hope you will join me in my efforts to inspire our wonderful and potentially really powerful poetic family here on FS to really rain on with positive inspirations in their works to offset the doom gloom and pure garbage being rained on us by corrupt and greedy Politicians-CRATS.and Media! Thanks always Vance

Comment from Badger_29

Exceptional

Lovely. I played the song
"Ripple" At my sister's late husband's memorial, so this really struck a chord. I was confused by one part though,

"Each a word is a drop of energy
That gives birth to love and sets it free"

Didn't you mean

"Each word"?

Anyway, simply outstanding.

Blessings,

Brother Badger

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018

Thanks so much Brother Badger, for this lovely, uplifting and encouraging review and glorious stars! I look forward to hearing from you always and hope you will join me in my efforts to stimulate positive and uplifting poetry in our ever-darkening times! Blessings always, Brother! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

reply by Badger_29 on 26-Feb-2018

Vance, you have cheered my during the dark night of my soul.
Darren

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018

Darren: Thank you sincerely for your lovely review and I'm sorry about your loss of brother in law. I'm not really sure what confused you in my poem but would appreciate knowing? Vance

reply by Badger_29 on 27-Feb-2018

The only thing I was confused about was a possibility of attack progressive call error because you said eat a word and when I read it I think you meant to say each word and delete the word "a"

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Vance;
This is such a lovely poem and a reminder of the importance of our words. Sending our thoughts out into the world takes bravery, but we must pray they have a positive impact,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks Patty, for your lovely review and kind stars. The history of your lovely works well demonstrates that you understand well, the value of positive reinforcement, and as I reach out to our beloved friends here on Fanstory to RAIN ON al the positive and uplifting gifts of their minds, I'm truly pumped, to know you are well on board with the same mission. Let's keep it up and truly make a positive difference in as many lives as possible! Blessings and Love always! Vance

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Quite a clever and lovely poem. Great description and phrasing with wonderful smooth rhyming. Thoughts contained within are good too.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thank you frogbook, for your lovely review and generous stars. I'm trying to encourage all of my poetic friends to focus on positive and uplifting poetry during this time of greatly negative media and press in our beloved AMERICA, so I hope you also will join the cause with your works as well. All the very best and thanks again! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Each a word is a drop of energy
That gives birth to love and sets it free
To fly beyond its paper shores
To touch a million hearts like yours ' Superb, beautiful, an amazing write. I fi had a six, it would be yours. Sadly it will have to be virtual. Outstanding. Kindest regards Meia x

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018

Oh, dearest Mia, how your lovely words lift my spirits and make me want to find beautiful words to make you smile. Yours have made me smile...thank you so much! Love and hugs! Vance

Comment from Chrissy710

Exceptional

Hi Vance What a lovely poem beautifully composed and a heartfelt message within to encourage poets of the world to let their words run free with love an honour in writing for each other Lovely Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018

Thanks so much Chrissy, for your lovely and generous review, and I am so grateful that you support my efforts to RAIN SOME POSITIVE ENERGIES ON OUR READER OUT THERE! Bless you always dear one! Vance

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

Hi Vance,
A lovely original flowing song~like rythmn to it . I enjoyed the couplet rhyming ( that's my muse) and the message is encouraging.
I will rain on! I hope you do too. Exercise is good for the brain, poetry is great exercise.
Hugs, Trisha

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks Trisha and please stay close! Vance

Comment from doggymad

Excellent

I love the imagery in this poem. You have chosen a unique approach to how poetry can spread its influence in the same way a the ripples in a pond.

While we have poets like you we will wallow in its refreshing flow

love and hugs

Freda and the boys xxx

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks so much dear Freda, for this lovely review and stars. Please give my best "ruffs" to the hairy lads, and have a wonderful week! Blessings and love always! VAnce

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written encouraging poem to poets to let the words in their minds rain down on paper in all kinds of poetic ways.

Typo
Each (a) word is a drop of energy

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thank you so much Sandra, for your lovely review and stars, and the typo notice..much appreciated! Blessings and Hugs always! Vance

Comment from apky

Excellent

Hello Vance,

You have crafted some very musical and inventive rhymes conveying a rare sincerity and inspiration. Your poem has oodles of truth that touch the heart. I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that you ventured into the theme of how poets interpret their words into love in such easy flows.

Well done with this excellent piece.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks so much apky, for this lovely review and stars! I am sincerely delighted that you enjoyed this work! Stay close! please. Vance