Hedgerow Tales
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Let's Go Fly Our Kites!"Book 3 in the Hedgerow Series
32 total reviews
Comment from doris1022
nice write and great flow cute story line....congrats on your book also. I am glad for you!! Hope you make a million or two. don't spend it all in one place though!!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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nice write and great flow cute story line....congrats on your book also. I am glad for you!! Hope you make a million or two. don't spend it all in one place though!!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much, Doris! Not only for the lovely review, but for your very kind wishes too!! And another big thank you for the 6 stars. Thank you!! xsx Sandra
Comment from Hollyhock
Great story again and I just love Reggie the Rat, he is such a cheek little character.
Try,
"I've already put all your kites in the van"
"They saw all their friends, out flying their kites".
"Then Daddy Mouse caught that string hanging down,
Wound round his hand it brought Cyril to ground".
"Daddy Mouse smiled but then told each one.."
I know I always do this and you don't have to agree but it just gives you more options.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Great story again and I just love Reggie the Rat, he is such a cheek little character.
Try,
"I've already put all your kites in the van"
"They saw all their friends, out flying their kites".
"Then Daddy Mouse caught that string hanging down,
Wound round his hand it brought Cyril to ground".
"Daddy Mouse smiled but then told each one.."
I know I always do this and you don't have to agree but it just gives you more options.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Thank you, Andrea!! Yes I know you always do this, but that's what this site is about, isn't it? To help, to learn and to improve. You have given me lots of great advice in the past, which I have used most of. I am going to post a huge one in a couple of weeks, it will only be read by a very few people, I expect, but I hope you will be one of them. It is a Christmas story, and as I said, its long! 30 stanzas by the normal 6 lines. I want to get this published for next Christmas if it is good enough. Some one like you reviewing it, would be a great help to me, if you have the time!!!! It is still with my little furry friends, so I hope it will be liked. Thank you, Andrea for this lovely and most helpful review, I do honestly appreciate it! xsx Sandra
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As long as you are happy, so am I. It's nice to feel useful, and to be honest it's nice to have something useful to say. Some writers can't bear any kind of criticism even though they claim to want a truthful review! Andrea
Comment from donaldww
Hi. Do I know these two mice? I think you wrote a poem about them a few months ago.
Cool. They're out for a kite flying day and picnic. Of course, a squirrel makes a perfect animal to try and help out and get himself in trouble.
Great poem for kids! I think that's who these poems are ultimately for.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Hi. Do I know these two mice? I think you wrote a poem about them a few months ago.
Cool. They're out for a kite flying day and picnic. Of course, a squirrel makes a perfect animal to try and help out and get himself in trouble.
Great poem for kids! I think that's who these poems are ultimately for.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Hi Donald, Thank you for your lovely review! You might have read some before, this is the 26th story. The first book of 11 stories is in the shops and on Amazon on 29th of this month! I am going home to England for the launch and I am so nervous! Fingers crossed for me! Thank you again, I really am pleased you enjoyed the story. xsx
Comment from Tina McKala
A beautiful children poem, loved the flow and imagery, perfect rhymes, a nice story told in a playful way, very fine read! Tina
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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A beautiful children poem, loved the flow and imagery, perfect rhymes, a nice story told in a playful way, very fine read! Tina
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Thank you Tina for the lovely review! Sandra. xsx
Comment from dmt1967
Very well written as always my friend I loved the furry friends adventures very good picture I enjoyed reading it thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Very well written as always my friend I loved the furry friends adventures very good picture I enjoyed reading it thank you for sharing
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Aw, thank you so very much!! What a really lovely review, thank you as always for your wonderful comments and also a BIG thank you for the super 6 stars!! Sandra. xsx
Comment from Curly Girly
A lovely tale all told in rhyme. Quite delightful and I am sure this is a fun read for children. It lends itself towards imaginative illustration. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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A lovely tale all told in rhyme. Quite delightful and I am sure this is a fun read for children. It lends itself towards imaginative illustration. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much, Curly Girly for your lovely review! My first book will be in the shops in three weeks time beautifully illustrated by Corrinas Creations on FanArtreview, she has done it proud! Thank you again! xsx Sandra.
Comment from flashlight
Wow, great poem. I love poems that tell stories and this one was very well presented and brought a smile to my face. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Wow, great poem. I love poems that tell stories and this one was very well presented and brought a smile to my face. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much flashlight for your brilliant review! I am delighted you enjoyed it!! Sandra. xsx
Comment from justatuna
I can't give you a 6 for this as I don't have one. This was a joy to read. Before I read your author's notes, I thought, "this should be in a book." Exceptional. Thank you. I think of writing children's stories, but I'm not ready yet. Thanks for the inspiration.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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I can't give you a 6 for this as I don't have one. This was a joy to read. Before I read your author's notes, I thought, "this should be in a book." Exceptional. Thank you. I think of writing children's stories, but I'm not ready yet. Thanks for the inspiration.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much for your lovely review! Your comments mean more to me than the 6 stars but it was so nice to think my story deserved it. Book 1 comes out in three weeks time, if it goes well, they might publish this one, so fingers crossed. It will go in book 2 which is called Hedgerow Friends. Thank you again, I did appreciate your very kind comments. Sandra.
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Thank you so very much for your lovely review! Your comments mean more to me than the 6 stars but it was so nice to think my story deserved it. Book 1 comes out in three weeks time, if it goes well, they might publish this one, so fingers crossed. It will go in book 2 which is called Hedgerow Friends. Thank you again, I did appreciate your very kind comments. Sandra.
Comment from Littlegirl38732
My Colton sure is a fan! His eyes lit up and he said " The baby mouse went flying?!" We laughed together after reading this one. How truly blessed you are to be able to write for children! I write things that my children cannot read most of the time. I'm just not good at writing for children but I wish I was. Especially after seeing colton so happy! Best wishes
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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My Colton sure is a fan! His eyes lit up and he said " The baby mouse went flying?!" We laughed together after reading this one. How truly blessed you are to be able to write for children! I write things that my children cannot read most of the time. I'm just not good at writing for children but I wish I was. Especially after seeing colton so happy! Best wishes
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Bless him! I love it if my story gets a smile from children. Thank you for this lovely review, and lovely comments, and a special thank you to Colton! xsx Sandra.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
What a fun work of poetry this is! A story wrapped up in poetic verse form. Such an interesting tale with a moral ta' boot! It flows really well with its rhyming scheme. The artwork goes great with the overall theme. The characters are cute furry animal friends that create an enjoyable read for adults and children alike. Good job!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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What a fun work of poetry this is! A story wrapped up in poetic verse form. Such an interesting tale with a moral ta' boot! It flows really well with its rhyming scheme. The artwork goes great with the overall theme. The characters are cute furry animal friends that create an enjoyable read for adults and children alike. Good job!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, MidnightWriter! I am so pleased you enjoyed it! xsx Sandra.
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You are welcome. Loved this work. :)
